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Princess Twilight was a nervous wreck as Principal Celestia was announce the winner of the crown. Sunset, now desperate, is willing to do anything to stop Twilight. Even if it means using force. After Sunset takes the crown, this time she casts a mind-controlling spell on everyone— including the HuMane 6.
A slight twist from the original story. Enjoy! 😆
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Please, do not make a sequel.
This story was too fast paced and only the last two chapters were a bit different from the first EQG. If the sequel is going to be like this, please do not make it.
Also I am sorry for bashing on your story, but I really didn't like it. Many have been trying to make an EQG fanfic in which Princess Twi stays in the human world for some reason... And like most of them your attempt was not very good.
And lastly while I find interesting Sunset having a part of her that resents pony Twilight and/or still being a bad girl, I downright hate when people make her a petty villain that wants revenge. Once again, please, do not make a sequel.
That's Ok not everyone likes Princess Twilight staying in the EGQ world. And I will make the chapters in the sequel at least twice as long and more slow paced. Thanks for your feedback.
Oh dang, this is an amazing alternate universe! :D
* Vice-Principal
I liked the story though it was a bit fast!