Derpy Hooves was no ordinary pony...she was very special...
Yes, this pony was not only special with her eyes but they give her a special power, a special feeling, a special love...
A special power that gave her a fate that dwells in her heart....
( Please have in mind this is only my second fic )
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I gotta say, this definitely isn't my favorite fanfic, but it's not the worst either. it has potential, but it needs a bit more fleshing out, maybe have derpy (you sure you didn't mean dinky?) use her power a bit more...I don't know, I'm not a very good author either...I don't even write pony stuff, but this seems more like a work in progress than a finished piece. like a lump of coal that has the potential to be a diamond but was displayed anyway.
Its pretty good. Characters could use more developement. But its pretty good for a first story
Why was there 8 chapters for that?
Why is this eight chapters? Just why?
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It is a real sad story!
Small D'aaaw moment.
awww that was so sad....
but awesome story
872558
why thanks! I tried my best!
................what the fuck...............
859155
what the fuck are you talking about?
Derpy's a girl, not a guy
and im now intrigued....
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I like it. Please repeat or better this story with different characters
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Thanks! I really was thinking of doing that some time!
So now derpy is doctor hooves daughter??? This is weird...
That's just grose.
No offence but I think this is getting a bit corny
Bam???
Cute, short. It's okay. Nice job
971152
Thanks!
And most people think Doctor Whooves is Derpy's father and I liked them as a family! I'm planning on maybe doing either a sequel or longer version!
859155
Dinky is Derpy's Daughter...Sorry.....
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Thanks for the fav by the way