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i do the art and may or may not write things, fight me

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This is why i love it when artists write! They come up with wonderfull concepts and give it there all just like in a picture.

Beutifull work btw and i have to ask is horrizons cannon in this or just the main story?
AND ANOTHER THING! Pleeeese have him meet the steel rangers that would be so freking cool!

7906825 Thank you for the compliments!
As for your question, I don't plan to integrate anything involving any other sidefic. I find that it's better not to require the reader to have knowledge of something you don't directly provide them with, especially in regards to a fic as long and extensive as Project Horizons.

7907175 Thanks for the clarification i just like to make shure some times!

Adding cannon from side ficks can be interesting but i feel that a blank slate makes for a more creative story at times:twilightsmile:
Either way i would love too see more and rember a story is about enjoying what youre doing so take it easy ok?:ajsmug:

Well I reviewed this fic so... yeah, here you go, you really should update this:
Review

Damn....

got to say that i love this fic already.

Thanks for sticking with it!
Oh and dont be so hard on youre self this is a fan fiction not an essay! Please by all means take youre time. I know for a fact the finished product will only be better for it!:twilightsmile:

There we go, added to the fallout equestria groups so it can gain a few more readers

Its rare finding stories so close up and down with the war, so colour me intrigued! Onwards on the grumpy old man adventures to find a pair of graves and/or ghouls of his kids!

Nitpicks:
"Just meant I had four times as much supplies to myself when it happened" I would say "many" or "the amount". Sounds a bit clunky right now.
" saw the strange pink cloud swallowing whole the city and mountainside it was built upon." Move whole to the end of the sentence.
"I had never seen something so disgusting" Linebreak error

So nightmare night decor... I can't remember when the bombs was said to fall in FoE, but I do like that throwback to the Fo games, and seeing how you are brilliantly bringing the Wasteland to life so far can I not wait for a bit of nightmare night spookyness to enter the Wasteland

Normally do I not read stories with less than 5 chapters in them since I just catch up with the story way too quickly, and yet again were I tempted and are now sitting here waiting for more! But yea quality over quantity wins every day, so are looking forward to the next chapter, although I hope that we won't have to wait a full year until the next one

Nitpicks
"I wasn’t still getting shot at" I was not still getting shot at... sounds a bit clunky to me.
"even moreso then when I needed the peace and quiet to focus on tending my wound." Delete
" it should’ve left by then, I’d realised. Through the downpour, I heard hoofsteps above me. Many, many, many hoofsteps, now accompanied by the frantic flapping of wings" Linebreak errors galore
"hey lol it only took a year" Start with a capital, end with a period

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