• Published 29th Nov 2016
  • 8,296 Views, 15 Comments

Flutters of Fancy - WishyWish



Eight days ago, a chemistry lab "accident" changed the flow of certain young mare's senior year of high school. They told her to report any ill effects - she chose not to. Alone in a seldom-used restroom, she goes about the exploration of herself.

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Comments ( 15 )

I read this. And i do not regret it.

7759548
I'll take that as a compliment :rainbowlaugh:

Very beautifully well written. Hope to see more, maybe even a sequel.

7760561
Glad you enjoyed it! There isn't much dialog in this story and thus I had some concern over large blocks of text, but I guess it worked out.

Sequel? Maybe? Depends on what people want to see!

7760596 I for one would like to see her fantasy with Applejack come true... :trixieshiftright:

7760684

Well, it did in the related artwork, so that's a distinct possibility!

This was amazingly well written. I definitely want more. Nay, I crave more!

7799327
Well there's...certainly enough inspiration artwork for it! :scootangel:

7799498
I would love to see that artwork.

7799777
Can't post it here. Just go on Derpi and search 'artist:audrarius'. It'll pop up eventually :twilightsmile:

Audrarius created an image specifically inspired by this story, and thus, that image is now the new cover art! Much thanks to the artist! :pinkiehappy:

Kly

Masterfully written, beautiful imagery, and so freaking HOT!! I love it! Definitely looking forward to anything else that you write WishyWish!

P.S. sequel maybe? I saw that you said in the comments that it might be a thing if people wanted it, but at the same time I don't want to push you into something you might not enjoy doing. I've seen other authors put out sequels to things and thoroughly despise writing it. So, yeah, just putting it out there that a sequel would be cool but that I wouldn't want to push you for it :pinkiehappy:

7852272
I have more hot stuff on here somewhere if you like, or so they tell me :pinkiecrazy:

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it. More? Sure, could happen. Especially because I love Audrarius's artwork!

7852272
Welp, sequel is happening, in case you wanted to know :raritywink:

DZE

This is extremely well done. Literary choices and resulting imagery are excellent.

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