A rambler of the highest order, the most scattered of brains, and a writer of dumb things.
After a mysterious Unicorn named Venser falls from the sky, ponies start acting strangely all over Equestria. As the problem spreads, Venser has to band together with a small group of ponies who remain unaffected to fight off an invading force that's already won.
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... Aw, man, you took my idea!
... Still gonna keep working my own WIP Equestrian New Phyrexia fic, lol. And my ponies won't have the help of any traveling Planeswalkers. At least you're nice enough to give them a hand in your plot. I ain't givin' them any out at all.
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It's pre-planeswalker Venser, got lost when his ambulator when off course and hit a time rift. Also, that's easier to write around than removing incredible powers from him. ;-_-
Cool a mtg/mlp crossover
Also please don't make equestria new new phyrexia
Twilight has been infected by the great oil
Dear lord, I just re read this, and I feel a need to apologize for the parts involving Rainbow Dash. I'm going to re-write at least the scene involving her and Twilight.
and I must say this 'Let the great work of new Equestria begin'
Your - Second-person singular possessive pronoun
You're - Contraction of "you are"
Pail - A bucket
Pale - Light in hue
Okay, that's out of the way. Now for actual commentary: This is certainly an intriguing start. Twilight as a pony analogue of Jin-Gitaxias promises to be incredible. As for Dash's reaction to the bones, well, Equestria is a sugar bowl, after all. Seeing the skeletal remains of a co-worker is an uncommon and rather traumatic occurrence. Still, your story, I can't tell you what to do. Well, I can, but only if you let me.
In any case, I look forward to more.
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Yeah, I've been thinking it over, and I think I'm good with the RD stuff for now, though for the next chapter, I still need to rewrite some stuff ;-_-
46976 You say "next chapter" as if you plan to make one. I thought you told me in person that you didn't really want to continue this. Oh well.