Journal of a Mad Pony

After a pony takes revenge for the wrongs he sees in the world, his journal is all that survives him

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Dracoliat

Dracoliat #1 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

Bravo, a moving short story with a good theme. 5 stars from me!

Anonymous XXX

Anonymous XXX #2 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

its well written. im kinda confused about why the guy skipped years in his journal and still kept it around, but hey, it worked. personally, im not a fan of the premise of the story, but hey, im not gonna let that bother me. you did a good job, and for that, you win several moustache spikes. hahaha you can have some stars too.

Jork

Jork #3 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

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That's how it turned out at least, I had originally planned for it to be more ambiguous as to whether he was being discriminated against or was just crazy.

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I tried to justify the skipping with the opening line about it being charred.

The reason I wrote this was because I wanted to write a story involving an unreliable narrator, though he turned out perhaps more reliable than I intended. But it still works as fiction so I decided I might as well go with it.

Anyways, thanks to everyone who read it!

Gypsy

Gypsy #4 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

badass, though I can't see this being continued.

im just wondering, don't earth ponies have endurance and strength? well nevermind the teacher was just a racist bitch (may Aponyllon torment her soul forever and ever in the name of out gods Celestia and Luna)

Jork