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Cockatrice+Chaos=Living statue?

20 years ago, A Pegasus named Raggedy Majesty was turned to stone by a cockatrice, but all of a sudden she finds herself a living, moving statue. and she now has two new goals in life: 1:Get back to normal, 2: get the annoying voice of discord out of her head.

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NaturalGlitch

NaturalGlitch #1 · Jul 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Dude, use the shift key properly. Seriously.

HyperionXV

HyperionXV #2 · Jul 10th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Noted a few grammar errors, but all in all seems to be an interesting concept at the least. Also seems to be few, if any, alternate words for "Stone", which gets a bit tiring seeing it for the fifth time in a paragraph. Sentence structure seems... off, for some reason I can't tell. Could just be all the dialogue, not really sure. Might be the lack of description, maybe just how fast the story is going. All in all though, a fine first story, if in need of refinement.

DragonKittey9