Tasting Berries
written by Damocles23
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You used "coily" several times, and they should all be "coyly" - in a coy manner, not "like a coil".
Interesting, well writer and enjoyable to read! Would read again!
WTF AUTHOR?! THAT WAS TOO HOT!
-blows on flames-
It's great to see this posted!
And....yeah I'm going to have to agree with Eldunarlan here, that story was almost too hot
Your story could use a small editing pass; I noticed several spots where you used words that clearly didn't fit the context of the sentence: like "subsumed" instead of "subsided".
But overall I liked it
Blossomforth doesn't know what she's giving up 
This was a great story, I always love an r63 member of the Mane 6 dating one of the other mare members.
So... Where are the berries?
8228066
This man asks the right questions
8229577 Do you have the berries?