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Thanks for the shout-out, Gentlehoof! I hid all the rope, by the way.
7575932 Why not just create a link? You could post the image on deviantart, derpibooru, or in a pinch, https://snag.gy/
This chapter gets all my yes'! This was a wonderfuly well done chapter.
Dove Song's Cutie Mark
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7576151 I graduated school a while back, so please forgive me when things slip through.
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I'd be happy to help edit this if you want. It's an interesting story that can progress into something bigger if enough effort is put forward. Good job on this chapter, by the way.
*puts on his lynchin' hat!*
"Corpse".
"Legs".
I feel kinda bad for the wolf there at the end. Strongbuck better pull through, tho... he especially doesn't want to make that pair of mares have to come after him!
7576605 Good catches! Those little typo's made it by , me, Peerlmmagination, and the spilling nazi irish_moon, who caught about five typos in previous chapters.
I thought for sure that Lets was always Legs before. So I checked a older draft and sure enough it was lets. How did everyone miss that one? Corpse is understandable but Lets! It was right there!
Oh well, all fixed thanks.
wounds
wrap
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Dammit. I thought I fixed those.
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These too!
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Odd, the 'wrapped' spelling error still seems to be in the story. In fact the very next paragraph:
Has the same mistake.
So we see a little of both Celestia's trolling origins in this as well as her more mystical side of things. Does this tribe have a shaman like person or is Celestia going to be the first they have? I see that the first healers have started to show up as well although with wounds like that blood loss and infection are going to be the worst to get over at this point.
So the tribe is getting both magic, and a military. Cool. I wonder if they will try there hooves at domestication, if the wolves have pups, or will they wipe them all out. Heck I wonder if there will be any animal speaker talents manifesting as well.
7578118 There will be domestication, yes. Wolves(dogs) make really good security alarms. Animal talkers, not in the same sense as Fluttershy.
7577763 Hay, what can I say. When I get stuck in a spelling rut, I stay in that rut. Got'm fixed now.
7577431 I just checked, the corrected copy you sent me didn't have those fixed! Hahaha, Get the rope boys!!!
I want to draw a scene from this so bad XXXDDDDDDDDDDD
7578828 You're right, that does sound weird.
It won't? Are you sure about this?
Also: Is it unusual for a mare to have teeth or is she merely mocking?
7586090 Plantain herbs generally won't harm you if you eat it. Plantain is used for many beneficial things. The leaves can be made into a tea or tincture, and this is said to help with indigestion, heartburn and ulcers when taking internally. Its natural antibacterial and anti-inflammatory properties make it great for speeding recover of wounds.
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The reference I made with the teeth is because Magpie is old, and doesn't have all her teeth anymore. She essentially is a old lady who looked at a young woman and said, "hay you have all your teeth still, here chew this for me."
Also because, they don't have oral care yet.
Absolutely fascinating concept, and a good story to boot.
I'm surprised no one pointed out how you just set up the ground work for one of their holidays (hearts and hooves day.)
Happy Hearts and Hooves Day!
I recall reading a series of books called Warriors, this has the same feel to it...just with ponies.
No, this is truly the birth of Molestia.