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This was a long one.
Jesus, I was like... Wtf?!
You're fantastic at visuals and all that, then this scene at the start got me flummoxed, thank Celestia I wasn't going crazy cuz I was doubting my knowledge of equine anatomy.
Well done, right at the start!
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Wow, this one chapter IS a story unto itself. I feel this is one of the best you've written yet, so much happens, feelings are felt, and I watched it in my minds eye with bated breath.
Save for misspelling Wild's name a couple times, awesome!
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Can you tell me where I misspelled Wild's name? There are over 9K words to look through. If you don't remember where, then you can tell me how it was misspelled and I can run a search for the word.
Forgot the 'in' there.
feeling
Well that was a chapter.
I kinda want to see someone ask Wild about how this experience changed him. What does he think about his own thoughts earlier that same day? About the future? Is he a better person now?
They found a group that are using bronze?
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Not bronze. Copper. Copper was useful to use as tools, but still soft and easy to work with as well as easy to obtain. Relatively speaking that is.
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Cool Beans! Glad you enjoyed my story. It was fun to write.
Hoo boy. Quite the eye opening adventure for Wild. Wondering if he'll compare what he did to Snap to what happened with Jennet. Those two other donkeys though... so sad.
Great chapter man. Always love seeing this story updated. Thanks for putting your energy into writing this for all of us.
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Yup, took a long while to read.
But I finally finished it!
And like the others already told you it was a good one.
A nice (proper) introduction to Wild. I've got a feeling that won't be the last we had read of him.
Question about the ending:
Are they now returning back home?
If yes, some unicorns will probably be angry for not getting their delivery in time. (Might even be the prologue to the next bigger event in this story...)
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They are past the half way point and are going to continue on. The Caravan is only bringing the food for the rebel Unicorns and they have plenty in reserve to last.
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Ah, I see.
I confused that with the tribute for the other unicorns.
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Ah, I see. The Tributes are taken by the Pegasi. That part is in the next chapt, which will be coming out as soon as Peers edits it. The rebel Unicorns need food too and Dusty has been bringing it to them with regular caravans. Feeding a growing rebellion is hard work.
there's hope for that colt yet. shame he doesn't see thee similarities between what was done to jenn and what he did to snap.
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Hold on, there's more to come with him.