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I have know idea why i thought this but when I reached chapter 38 i thought the story was over i must of been super tired or something
new magic , new life , new love.
defiantly a grate chapter.
How are the birth scenes always so dramatic!
Its like: we don't need action scenes because when someone says "she gone into labor" its "OH SHIT!"
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The secret is to keep it different each time.
BTW- Nearly peed myself reading your post. That really floored me!
when she hEard
this IS going
kiCking
Space after period
cOme
breathE This is a mistake you keep making.
on THE juicy
love WITH him
Period
Replace period with coma, and feelingS
walkED
moveD
I feel like this whole chapter was completely unnecessary. Not that I didn’t like it, it’s just that didn’t tranquil already ask dusty to be his mate and he said yes? So she should have the green light to mate with him, no?
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Its what happens when I back peddle an idea after a point and try to change things to fit something new I had come up with, after the fact. I of course miss things in the past that already cover something on it. I did the same with Mustard's pregnancy. At first she was all for it, but later I changed her feelings to being that of confused and scared, but still happy. I'm still not sure my alterations to that part fit in smoothly or just made a jarring mess.
I at first was going to have Tranquil and Dusty becoming a couple during that earlier journey to the pegasi, but decided to make it a stepping stone of a longer relationship so that Skye could be involved and wouldn't seem like he was picking up mare's behind her back. In this society, a stallion would need the approval of his first mare to take in other mates.