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My brain felt like mush when I was writing this chapter. I knew what I wanted to say in it, but I had the stupidest time writing it down. I think life and lack of sleep is catching up to me.
I love this chapter. It's wonderful to see the ponies discovering these innovations, and cutie marks, I'm practically squeeing because of how awesome it is.
7549288 Thank you, you just made my day.
Rabid spellcheck fox attacks!
"on", unless they're doing the "Come one, come all!" thing... (poor stallion)
"your"
Should be one sentence.
"definitely"
"You're" and "Bark's"
"planning", also should be one sentence with a comma.
"to", also should be one sentence.
"you're"
Should be once sentence.
"were"
"placed"
"an"
"You're"
"were"
7549641 wow, you earned your cutie mark for this one. That was a lot.
I am never going to learn to stop doing the [your-you're] thing. No matter how hard I try they keep slipping though.
Most of the other mistakes I would normally have caught but I rushed it in the end and only read through it once for typos.
7549690 Don't feel too bad; I mess up my "you're/your"s from time to time, too.
I absolutely adore this fic. It's worldbuilding from a time period that's always intriguing to me. I look forward to more!
7549210
Nah, writing's always like that.
Well I'm lucky to have caught this so close to an update lol, well I don't mind slice of life stuff as actually I think the story could use that from time to time to help flesh out the characters and the world after all. So we get the start of buildings and farming in this, should be interesting to see how they'll set up the village. Although if they discover fire they're going to learn the hard way I'm afraid of what happens when it's in an enclosed place with no windows or outlet for it.
Just how old is Melodious and Meadowlark as you said the older one is both pregnant and remembered her as a newborn so the age is got me wondering. Especially since the older you get the more dangerous childbirth can be as well.
Oh, that did you mean with "They are going to eat that colt alive" last chapter.
Nice chapter!
So, they improved storaging food and building houses, and invented spears and farming.
Yup, they are evolving.
Just like this story. But unlike the story the description is mostly the same like after the first chapter, back when it was intended to be a One-Shot(?). Maybe consider updating it?
7550212 Meadowlark is about 16 and Melodious is close to, or slightly over 30.
Age is a little goofy thing in MLP. The main 6 are about 16. You can deduce this from the equestrian girls movie, when they are in high school. Judging from what they said about what drove their friendships apart from the previous year, they would then be in the 10th grade, which means they are about 15-16.
Another thing about age is from the cake twins. In the episode where they are born, you see them one month after their birth and they are walking and chewing on toys.
In real life, mares can breed in as little as one and a half years after birth. Stallions just one year. But it would be dangerous for the mare to breed so young.
Granny Apple shows how old a pony can live. About 100 years.
7551019 I thought about updating the Description, but I am really bad at that sort of thing, and I just look at it and think... "I'll do it latter" And I put it off.
So, I'll update it at some point, just as soon as I stop saying "I'll do it latter."
7551422 Actually I think when Twilight and Sunset go through the mirror into the human version of their world their ages are changed along with their physical bodies as there is no way 16 year olds can own their own business (or more in Rarity's case) have their own homes and act more like adults than teenagers. Plus the fact that there is a human Celestia and Luna who are not over a thousand years old put some credit into the ages being altered part. So I don't consider the ages of their human counterparts to match up with their pony versions as it's an alternate reality and not a parallel reality. The difference being parallel are similar realities with some change to them while alternate are realities with a lot more differences to them.
7551449 Well, a lot of people have been debating their ages for some time. In my story I am keeping in line to being closer to human aging. Like puberty hitting somewhere around age 10-13.
Celestia is Meadowlarks first foal.
7551019 I finally updated the description.
7558832 Thank you. I tried to keep things both balanced and exciting, and I'm happy to see that I hit the sweet spot.
Keep a weather eye out, the next chapter is coming soon.
Cutie Mark sounds cute?
Well DUH!!!
Shouldn't "It's" be it had?
Her, not his
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This is correct. Celestia is sleeping, draped over Dark's back.
I believe it should be "an adorably creative filly".
"There mates where" maybe?
"Became"
Lol i guess you do have a ceauty mark for typos. Still finding them in 2018. xD
Not even i can type 100 words without some kind if mishap.