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DraconequusMedia12


Hello there everypony it's nice to be here, this is my first time since high school I've written anything again so please give me constructive feedback and tell me what needs improving on future works

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When Twilight finds out that a Changeling is lurking around Ponyville, she and Spike spring into action and try to catch this elusive customer as fast as they can. But things keep getting in their way, weather it be bees or some Dragon sneeze tree leaves and etc, is leaving Twilight to wonder how long her mission will take before she finds one?

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Apart from needing a editor to go over it I quiet like this story I do hope to see more of it

7461234 Thank you ChakaRedstripe and thanks for the feed back. Since my friend who usually helps me edit my stories will be very busy for a long time, do you know anyone in particular or any groups on Fimfiction that can help me edit my current and future stories?

Unfortunately not though I do believe that you can request help in the chat. I've seen people ask before not sure how well it went though

Lol my avatar

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