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RayDawn
I'm a College Student who mostly reads fanfics of a show intended for little girls. This is really weird...
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Who would that be? Or is it a spoiler?
8142923 it is a spoiler. If I tell you it would reveal a lot about "The Figure," so I won't.
I'll give this a fav, follow, and like. Let's see where this goes.
please continue
Yes, I like this story already!
.................... is someone ACTUALLY using The Phantasm?!
8148917 I'm not using the Phantasm, but the character's look was based on them,
So good job pointing that out!
8151279 O-oh.
*Huddle's in corner and cries*
The part with the picture of Twi is funny! And the moron forgot to include in the letter that the 'victims' were perps themselves!!!
8180130 That's the point. Have I shown that Commissioner Lance was smart?
8180932 well, good point. -__-
Lolz! Poor Flash!!
8201023 Yeah, he's being treated like the stereotypical rookie
8201145 Good thing he didnt go with construction! Or else hed have a helluva time finding that board stretcher!! xD
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There, there, it's all right. I'll make a Phantasm Displaced story for you. Truth be told, I've wanted to do a female Displaced for awhile now.
Why not use the new captain of the guard? Shouldn't Shining be too busy?
8211252 yeah, but if there is an official one, I don't know him and I already had two OCs and I didn't want to have too many. Also, I didn't want to make another OC as I am kinda bad at it. I already dislike the Commissioner...
8211238 Lol, they might hold you to it!
8211238 IF IT'S FROM A COMIC CON AND NOT FROM AN ACTUAL DC UNIVERSE I WILL BURY YOU.
Wow...
Btw, why is this a crossover?
8212957 The figure is from something else. A yellow wingless dragon with magic? The short tail? His ruthlessness? It all points to something, that is kinda obscure. His language? Also from the source material. Anymore and I practically told you, which I will do next chapter. Though I did make some changes to better fit MLP.
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But from wheeeeeeerrreeee?????????
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I'll PM you, but don't tell anyone.
8215154 mkai! :3
I feel ashamed but can someone tell me who Duulo is based off?
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Well, his look is based on The Phantasm, his race is from Dungeons and Dragons 3.5 edition, and his language is the Draconic from that. His backstory I just made up from the start, the name Duulo, I only recently decided on, specifically, after I wrote his backstory here. Hope that answered your question. Also here is the translator I used: Translator
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More then answered.
Honestly, I think the story is too short and far to fast paced, it has potential to be a great story but it should be longer
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I'm not very good at long stories to be honest. I'll have to agree on the fast pace though.
I think this was a cool little story!! I expected it to be a little longer like him helping the mane 6 with stuff or something..... But its kewl!!! :3
First chapter had an edge to it, suspense and the knife to cut it, now it's more like beating a dead horse, or pony I should say lol
but no seriously him going white knight and telling his entire life's backstory doesn't seem right, but I guess I expected something else from the character
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I didn't really see it as him going white knight. I just saw it as he needed a reason to kill, because I always saw him as a person who believed in how the ends justify the means and in this since Celestia is a ruler, and especially what she did to her sister,
I thought she would agree. That was my reasoning as to why she let him go.