Crossover with Command and Conquer : Red Alert 2.
When the War against Soviet Union come to end, the Allied Mobile Construction Vhiecle get swapped while their the Chrono shift transposition with the stranger and the original get send to weired pony land.
Please do not take seriusly this, i just write this because i want learning english and want know how will be actually hard to writing story.
This will be must be terrible story as author is some Asian noob that beginner in both writing and english study, any help to improve in both language and story is welcomed.
First time writing a story?
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Yes sir. This is first time actually writing story. I just happened to learn English in this site as I nearly live here for two~three year from now but i used to absolutely no related to write anything in both English and my native language.
Thank you for your attention.
7433823 I see.
In there next chapter, Celestia should break the rules and allow the Allies to help.
Say. You played any Command and Conquer games?
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As you see in chapter 5 ending , it will not just beg help to allied but Royal are just robbed MCV from Allied to forced them fight for royals.. I Was planned in my head
Still rule or not allied don't want fight for them. I actually think hard to how mere two heavy tank can beat living superweapons.. I think it was stupid that even Princess Cadence have enough chances to beat apocalypse already, but if is that , story will just ended and I will forced to writing boring life with mane six that i naver want do...
Yes i mostly like Zero hour and have enough multiplayer experience but i can not find have excuse to write displacing...
7433865 I see. I remember the apocalypse tanks. Those tanks are deadly!
When you first started this story?
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Um.. I guess july .22~23 ... I honestly didn't have good memories that causing trouble to remember long length sentence from many story i read..
7433978 Ok
General Zero Hour? Is he a real character?
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Negative sir, it just personal favorite opinion like your special somepony.
I apologize that if that confusing you.
Thank you for your attention.
I understand that you have poor English skill and mine is still in progress. However, would you like to read my Wolfenstein + Command and Conquer Generals crossover with Star Wars elements like Death Star II, AT-AT, and Super Star Destroyer when I finish?
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Sure. I will like to read generals and crossover elements.