Twilight falls for a mare that nopony expects, Rarity. The question was, how was she going to tell her, and what if '...She rejected me, or worse, even laughed at me for thinking something that seems near impossible to happen when thought about!?!?....'
This was adorable, if a bit forced.
One thing I did notice was the fact that you lack spaces after quotation marks. An easy fix, or you could invest in an editor.
Have a nice day!
How do you know?
Spikey told me earlier dear...
7378211 Thanks for the advice!
7378527 Lol!
7378592 Spikey's always the gentle colt er... drake.
7378627 lol
Awwww, cuuuuuute!