There was a time that I loved somepony, I thought it was just a silly crush, I would get over it soon, and there was nothing to worry about, but that's not how things turned out. After all this time I thought I was over you, I thought that I had forgotten about how I felt whenever you were near me, but I was wrong, because the truth is...I never have stopped loving you.
Written in the first person (from Rarity's point of view).
During her lifetime in Ponyville Rairty has gone out with many a pony, however after each time she just feels more and more depressed.
After yet another disappointing date out with some stallion that she can't even remember the name of, she returns to her home, and goes back in her mind to think about the one and only pony that she turly did love, yet she could never tell them how she felt, for she feared it only hurt her more.
it's missing something, namely a unique connection to the 2nd person constantly being referred to. The name at the end could've been literally anyone and it wouldn't have changed the story one bit.
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What do you mean by, 'a unique commection'?
And thank you for commenting by the way
KillerChainsaw ;)
This is a nice reading, the passing feels ok and its full of feelings.
I feel sorry for Rarity, and that's hard to do... unless the fic is good... XD
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Glad you liked it, and thank you.
KillerChinsaw ;)
Some intense rambling going on, but I suppose that's just Rarity's mind going haywire. Nice story, anyways!
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Thank you, and yes the rambling is because Rarity's mind is a bit out of sorts at the moment.
KillerChainsaw ;)
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She'll probably never know about it.
Thank you for reading.
KillerChainsaw ;)
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No doubt Dash would be surprised at first, but I think she would happily accept Rarity's feelings after a little time to think,
and they would live happily ever after, and things would go from there.KillerChainsaw ;)