My sister left the fridge open again, so I now have to go down to the store to buy new milk and shit. I get there just fine and start filling my shopping basket when a guy with a gun enters and starts demanding money...
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8153049 By rewrite, do you mean of the chapters or the info at the top for the story? Just wanna know so I can reread or not.
8167168 I rewrote the whole story from the original start (he was born with his demonic power and managed to teleport himself to Equestria). This was due to the old one's origins not being too well received.
8167173 Well Dayum. I gotta reread the shit outta this!
8167182 Erm I changed nothing when I published this story, it was a previous one I had removed that wasn't liked.
8167185 Okay, but it says I've read this.... okeh then, I don't know whats going on...
8167188 Maybe you've forgotten it? I've read a few stories and forgot what they were about a reread them. :)
Soo.... i think we found the origin of the undead plague?
For some reason i'm reminded of the scourge from warcraft...
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARY STUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
8167250 NOOOO ONEEEEE CAAARRREEEESSSSS.
Have the undead dragoness snu snu with spike.
8167271 Obviously you do or you wouldn't have commented
8167284 huh.... Touche.
8167250 Who doesn't like an overpowered motherfucker? Saitama is the ultimate Gary Stu yet badass.
8167310 ehhh the purpose of Saitama is to BE a gary stu it's why he's good, the entire purpose of his character is to be a play on the Gary Stu Trope and to make fun of shonen tropes. BUT I am gonna look at your story just cus.
8167319 It's all any author can ask for. But if you're going to rip into me... Just be gentle.
8167324 prepare your anus :P
BOSS BATTLE!!!!
Cliffhanger...
QUICK GET THE DRAGONBORN! Oh wait .........
8167508 I'm sorry, Mario. But your Dragonborn is in another fic.
8167194 Wait, so what did you mean by it was this way when I published it? 'Cause before you said it was a rewrite, so I'm just really confused. Did the original(non rewrite) start with the MC going and buying some stuff at the store before getting shot, and in the rewrite he's born with the powers? If so, then I haven't read the rewrite; just read the original.
8167194 MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you don't mind...
8167620 The first draft was he was born with his powers. It wasn't very well liked so I rewrote it into this story.
Feminine voice... Did you write Sindragosa into this story? :P
8167647 Oh my fucking god... I am an idiot. How long has it said that you rewrote it, 'cause if it's as long as I think it is, then I'm just a retard.
It is I, The Lord of Tartarus.
Speaking of which, isn't Cerberus... eh, whatever.
8168019 Cerberus was the guardian of the gate under Canterlot... SPOILER: Celestia managed to throw him through the gate before destroying it. A certain yellow thestral will find him later.
Damien: (transforms) THE MOTHERFUCKING OVERLORD, THAT'S WHO!
Guardian: ...Oh. (starts sweating anime-style) Well then... welcome home milord! Hehe... hee...
Damien: ...
Guardian: ...I'm gonna die, aren't I?
Well, After a little bit of reasoning it should be decided by the Guardian to let the group through. After all, It would be rather silly to keep Demons from being where they should be, when your job is the opposite.
8168120 she gun git so rekt!! X3
8167581 heheheheeheeeehheehehhehehhehhhhhehehheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee........
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8167280 oh good lord! The first thought that wwnt through my head was 'death by snu snu'!!!!
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I AM LITERALLY DYING RIGHT NOW!!!!!XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
8167324 thoughts went through my head.......
dirty, dirty thoughts........
Someone send help..........
8167324 what.... THE FUCK ?????????
"Uh, the overlord. I kinda live there. Can I go back?"
"Uh.. sure i guess. Never had a demon want to go back..."
8167271 fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/277/d/d/dr__who_cyberman_by_tristjones-d5gsfpc.jpg This is correct.
*Hopes fervently* Please make his response funny. Please make it funny. Please make it funny. Please make it funny. Or have desire pipe up. Just, please make it funny.
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