My sister left the fridge open again, so I now have to go down to the store to buy new milk and shit. I get there just fine and start filling my shopping basket when a guy with a gun enters and starts demanding money...
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I bet he has some connection to Iron Will.
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it's iron will's 2 twice removed, great great great two hundred or so more great grand Uncle on his mothers side (i made this up idk if there is any relation what so ever)
the planning for the town begins and everything is taking shape nicely tho they might need to keep watch out for if the griffins make trouble for a while i can't see them backing down that easy even if they got that dock free of smuggling sea dogs lol
So he forgot. Oh well, that's about par for the course. I hope I didn't throw off your groove with my last comment, though I do stand by what I said.
Anyway, I don't want to be that guy, so might I remind you that while it's cool that you aren't disregarding what people are saying in the comments section, you should always take what people say as suggestions until you decide you agree with what they're saying.
So another suggestion I have that you can take or leave as you want, is that if you think the story is either getting too cluttered, slowing down or you're just losing interest, that's typically the point where you would want to tie things up and start a new arc. A level up in stakes and weight class, a new central theme and conflict that might breathe new life into the story and you might be interested in exploring. One idea I can think of off the top of my head would be having the Necromancer's soul infect Thanatos from the inside, like a tapeworm. Really, there are several directions you could take the story from there.
Or you could just tie things up and achieve the elusive "The End", if you're completely bored with the story and/or want to move on
with your lifeto something else.Bitch, an undead boss of a momma told you right to your face that it sucks, she even made your face look better by spitting on it afterwards to emphasize her feelings about it.
Sucks pinkie couldn’t turn him from some crappie doll, to a ghoul to make that obvious to him.
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Hmmm, it's an idea. The next few chapters are gonna be chill with Equestria sightseeing and such. The Gryphons aren't out just yet though.
Like the chapter
So, after reading this I'd say I'm enjoying it, but it is a little rough in parts. In particular I find that you tend to resolve conflicts really quickly. Most every fight Damien gets into he ends quickly. I get it he's like purposefully op, but tbh reading that Tirek fight I was like "Yep. Hes gonna run around a bit then stab him without any real repercussions." I got my hopes up with the aftermath of that fight, but then that was resolved in an instant too. Im just not feeling the tension. Also, like, I cant help but feel you wrote this just to turn ponies into demons. Felt a little contrived when the Mane 6 got turned, mostly because it happened to all of them. I cant help but fear this story will end with a large majority of the world becoming demons. I dunno. The character interactions are decent for the most part and the overarching plot is interesting enough. Just feels kinda... unexciting.
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Hmmm, I see where you're getting at, I think I'm just losing interest in writing these days. I originally started to improve my spelling and grammar, which I have over the years, but now after six and a half years of writing, I think I've got what I wanted out of it. I'm still going to try to keep my stories going, but it's just getting harder to focus on them nowadays between sprite work and practicing my 3D modelling.
Through the power of friendship hell conquers the Earth. Well that's what it looks like is happening
I'm guessing this is dead but I still really want to see where this goes
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Stories that haven’t been update in 4 years can suddenly gain a new chapter, this isn’t dead, it will get updated. Wait a minimum of 3 years before deciding that, or check when the author was last online.
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Best Hell Invasion Ever!
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Came across this, think it fits.
The Monk
Took most of the weekend, but I marathoned the whole thing. I have to say, I really like it.
The MC is intelligent, and I giggled when the bad guy was monologuing, and he just killed the guy. Exactly what I would do.
It was very easy for me to empathize with the guy because his choices were mostly what I would do.
While this story is already over 50 chapters long, I still hope that there will be some more of it coming.
(if the Author is curious, converted to an MP3 Audio book, the story is 15 Hours and 51 minutes.
Very well done,
Monk
“What else to do? How did people survive boredom in olden times? ... Oh yeah, lots of stabbing." -RushyFiction
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I am glad to say I stand corrected