My sister left the fridge open again, so I now have to go down to the store to buy new milk and shit. I get there just fine and start filling my shopping basket when a guy with a gun enters and starts demanding money...
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Building tensions, but still good to see more chapters good work. I find it much more thought out than the original when it reach this scene.
Or option C try to pay her debt, I hate when characters in stories act like idiots. Even if paying Gilda debt would fail you could've made this chapter a tad longer and show how cruel the griffin rule is.
Go Damien!
Fck the gryphon king and his stupid laws!
7890494 Exactly. They hadn't received any indication that it wouldn't have worked until after they'd already rescued her. It doesn't make sense for them to immediately go for the jailbreak option without even considering the possibility of paying off her debt, especially when they deliberately brought up the fact that Gilda still had a sack full of gold earlier in the chapter.
Well shit dash just might get the bitch slapped out of her if that attitude of hers doesn't calm down.
7890494 THANK YOU
7890589 YOU'RE WELCOME.
7890589 to be fair. she did say she had the cash but they are just dickheads and wanted to lock her up. sooooo. no go.
7890754 That may be so but that was months ago both in story and in real life, given how slow the updates are.
So things can be forgotten, still they should have at least tried other things like bribery, at this point i'm surprised that Damien didn't just go get Gilda and kill everything in his way, cause that's how he solves 99.09% of his problems.
Given Gilds personality she sees everyone as dweebs or dickheads, especially people with authority, shes a rebel with reputation, and lets not forget Gilda didn't pay her rent, given what we know about Griffin law from this story apparently that's a crime, so dickheads or not they were in their right to do what they did, but thanks to Damien and the moronic squad Gilda is now a wanted bird in Griffin empire so have fun never coming back or living live of a outcast.
And let's not forget all problems can be solved with enough money, the gold that Gilda has, the dragon horde, they had to bring some oi it with them, and some cash from the city that Damien claimed.
Honestly this chapter feels like lousy excuse so that Gilda will come with the gang to Tartarus.
7890861 Hmmm, yes I did plan to have Gilda tag along, SPOILER: also the King is a tyrant and bleeding Gryphonia with high rent and taxes. He's like a selfish greedy old King from the medieval era who thinks he's entitled to anything.
good job
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I take it you're going to make Damien have a "chat" with him on what it means to rule?
Hmmm?
Welp they didnt kill anyone so they failed the mission
7891081 always a good day when you upload my good sir. Only way for it to be better is if evergreen heart or of flame and shadows updates too.
Jesus, Demon. Being a bit of a fucking Dick, aren't ya?
7891808 They're fine on the affection their mother or father gives them till they hit sixteen which is when they'll need more. Or if their Master is a cruel bastard and rapes them young...
7910102 Pictures for what?
7893012 I realized this after hugging my mom and reading about two more chapters!
Well, either that or pay off the debt, you have a fuckload of gold from raiding a dragon nest if I remember correctly. But no let's go kill people.
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Oh wait nevermind.
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Take it you realised she wasn't allowed to have her debt paid off? It's the king's way of getting free manual (slave) labour.