My sister left the fridge open again, so I now have to go down to the store to buy new milk and shit. I get there just fine and start filling my shopping basket when a guy with a gun enters and starts demanding money...
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Me: First boss?
Author: (nods sagely) First boss.
this guy went to the school of edgy mic edgy fucks first the pale skin, black trench coat, black pants, white undershirt and now this. He seems to be from edgeville or an emo contest anyway interesting so far
I wonder how he can beat the demons in town without a problem but fails to move one female demon that was sitting on his chest.
7438893 his body was probably still getting used to the changes and could not effectively use his abilitys
7409432
Hahahahahahaha
That's hilarious im gonna use that quote some time
FUCK i just cut myself on all that edge
8618887
I recommend some sudacrem and a plaster.
"Look miss demon lady, I'd very much appreciate it if you didn't kill, eat, or rape me," I ask her with wide eyes as I can't help but stare at her chest which she has squished together between her arms as she pins me down.
"Kill? Eat? Well, I'm not gonna kill ya cause then I'd starve, but I can eat you in a good way," she replies suggestively and licks her lips. She then leans down and puckers her lips as she gets closer to mine.
"STRANGER DANGER! I NEED AN ADULT!" I scream as I try to pry her off me but she's surprisingly strong.
God damn it, it could be perfect if only you added one mo- wait.
"Look miss demon lady, I'd very much appreciate it if you didn't kill, eat, or rape me," I ask her with wide eyes as I can't help but stare at her chest which she has squished together between her arms as she pins me down.
"Kill? Eat? Well, I'm not gonna kill ya cause then I'd starve, but I can eat you in a good way," she replies suggestively and licks her lips. She then leans down and puckers her lips as she gets closer to mine.
"STRANGER DANGER! I NEED AN ADULT!" I scream as I try to pry her off me but she's surprisingly strong.
As I struggle to get the succupony off me she leans down and says one thing “I am an adult.”
Perfection
Así sin más le dice dónde vive. enserio?
Pacing is awkward, and you'd expect the protagonist to be a little more upset over being used by a succubus, even if she was hungry. It wasn't his fault she was hungry, least she could do was stick around a while.
He also should've also stopped a minute and attempt to figure out what to do next. Gather info, learn about his new abilities, learn about the guy he needs to kill. Also he needs to reel at and come to grips with his situation.
I have a strong feeling that all of the demons that come to fight him are going to get their ass clapped
👎 No...... I can't take it on how these oc's act in fan made stories.
She might like the verbal abuse dude! Just be silent and run like hell... THEOUGH HELL!!! LMAO!
You need more than an adult dude°°°°!!!!! BWHAHAHAH THE STRANGER DSMGER SHJT!!!LOLOLOL
10005243
As long as it doesn't lower to manhua levels of annoying ness than that's fine by me.