My sister left the fridge open again, so I now have to go down to the store to buy new milk and shit. I get there just fine and start filling my shopping basket when a guy with a gun enters and starts demanding money...
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Welp, as far as meeting the in-laws could go, this is actualy way better than mine did.
there is so much rofl here can't wait for more
Wait... does this mean Flurry in this story might be a half-demon?
Forgot to cap there.
Heheheheh
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Nice find, fixed.
And now begins the endless cycle of Velvet fainting. Bwuahaha.
I still find it funny how demons are the mindless savages who only know how to be pure evil yet damn near everything the demons did was self defense and in several cases the guards faults (under a mind controlled Celestia's orders, but not so relevant for some of them) such as that arrow that almost killed Twilight, the massacre at Fluttershy's cottage, or the extreme torture that forced them to become demons to have a chance at getting their lives back. What would everyone prefer anyway? Celestia's mental state degrading to the point she turns into a tyrant worse than TCB or Diaries of a Mad Man, or become a demon and stay the loving princess she is.
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i would want the 2nd option
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My guess is that either,
A. they find a way to turn back into ponies.
B. Flurry heart won't exist in this story.
c. she will exist and she will indeed be a hybrid.
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do i want to know?
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I vote C.
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same.
I'm honestly starting to dislike this story. The main character has turned into an idiot who believes demonization without real provocation is the answer to damn near everything. And then it's just completely glossed over. It started to go downhill when the massive timeskips happened, with the massive harem with 15 different children he has practically no interaction with. The story started as a guy thrown into a shitty situation and trying to make the best of it into a clusterfuck of characters, MLP characters being turned into demons with no real repercussions at all, and now he's apparantly gone so numb to the plights of the normal anything that he thinks radically changing the life of everyone around him to suit his needs is an okay thing to do. His own goddamn sister is fair game for him. It's completely ridiculous.
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3 girls make a massive Harem? And he only has six kids who are all over 40 years old now.
As for his sister, the energy of Tartarus itself turned her, not him. And they will in no way have any sexual moments.
As for the whole demonizing at will, granted that's getting out of hand, but realise he's very different now than when he first arrived. He's lived on Tartarus and its brutal ways far longer than he did on Earth that he adapted to most of their ways and customs while adding his own from Earth.
If you have any ideas on something you think would help make it better, I'm all ears.
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For me at least, it feels like there is a lot more since they're referenced but not really interacted with at all. They're mentioned, but that's about it. And he may have changed, but I don't think a reasonable being would drastically change and probably ruin the life of someone on a whim, even if they are a dick.
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So what would you do when said individual ordered your death and meant it?
Wonderful story as always, Urimas. I re-read everything up to this point after I saw an update for this stoey. I thoroughly enjoyed it the 2nd time around as much as the first. I'm looking forward to any future chapters you post.
And might I suggest some romantic rivalry between Gilda and Cadence?
Would be entertaining to see a cat fight between the two.
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Sounds like fun. I'll think about it.
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When I read the description I honestly didn't know what to think, but now that I've read it I want MORE!
Good Work AoD is awsome just the right amount of dark, a bit steamy~ and fun all the way through.
Good luck with AoD & Terra I look forward to more.
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And suddenly all those Eldritch-God-Flurry-Heart memes make so much more sense.
(3:05)
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Everyone certainly has an opinion on any poll, but I alas do not really agree with yours, my friend. Changing the character for that period of time is not quite simple, but understandable. He passed neither one nor two, but with a dozen other warriors and battles for his relatives, friends and simply for a new life for all demons. In war, a person experiences tremendous emotional and psychological overloads, at the sight of the death of friends and enemies, the value of other people's lives diminishes. A person is in constant expectation of danger from either side, always ready to take decisive measures to fulfill his military duty. There are no halftones in the war, either you are your own or you are an enemy. In war, you can immediately see who is a real fighter, and who is a coward. War does not necessarily break a person, it makes him differently treat people and life values. Therefore, it can be understood. And if you take MLP characters, then your picture looks quite strange to me - Fluttershy and Twilight in the graves, the other four will be at best in jail, at worst there where the first two (to whom will Spike send a letter if Twilight is dead?). As for his sister, would you prefer death from an overdose or a minus vein in the bathroom during a depression, or maybe a corner of the furniture when Jack hits it again? As for me, this is a very, very dark picture, even black. That's what they say my opinion.
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But still for one detail in the comments Alot Master's can be hooked and I would like to voice it as an idea.
Despite the presence of two (in the future three) wives, we only know about the nature of Desire and about most of the characters and the very personalities of his children and even Slitherana. History has already made its turn so the idea is this:
Show some kind of children's flashbacks, funny stories, "ding" family Twilight will probably want to hear stories from the life of Damien (logically) about how he was a father as his wife coped with all matters and responsibilities during and after the birth of children and everything in such a spirit.
Hmmm ... well, or as an option ... I do not know ... whether you played StarCraft 2🚀, there was a moment when Zeratul gave Reynar the crystal ihon so that he could see his memories from his point of view. You can try to write something like this - crystals with sealed memories on the monet of family video recordings? (I doubt that the demons came to the photo and video shooting)
How do you like this idea? That help readers better understand the family and children of the protagonist
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Knock out shit of the individual (even without gloves), and if he find more, then six grams of lead, like a fee for diligence.
Sorry for bad english, I'm using a translator
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I do plan to make more flashback chapters. Just like his nightmare chapter of Adderine's death and his rage that followed. I guess I can add chapters of Desire telling Twilight what her pregnancies were like and what followed.
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Okay, I'll be looking forward to it.
Although there is still a question so out of curiosity - At what time interval of the original series the main six "left" with Damien? (Considering that Gilda spent months in captivity with the dragon, well, is there a meeting with Trixie, a talent show, a sound rainbow, Pinky's birthday?)
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It was around two to three months after the return of Luna/NMM that Damien was pulled into Equestria.
Great chapter and it's great to see you again.
By far the funniest chapter in any of your stories yet, and that's saying something compared to the chapters in Godly
hey if the pony's have a mirror portal to the perllel world of there human world why now the Tartarus he can cancer the mirror portal of hell right?
this still in the works?
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Taking a break until December, but yes, it's still in the works.
Heheh.
Heheheheheh.
AHAHAHAHAHAH!!!
......... I like this a lot
I'm wondering if Discord and Chrysalis will be involved further, since they're both apparantly demons. That could be an interesting story arc.
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You 100% are not. :)
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look in description. There's link to clop chapters.
When is the next chapter coming out? Is it taking a while to do? I understand if life is throwning curve balls your way that it's taking longer, but I really want to see a new chapter soon. Provided, it's quality, not quanity.
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Yeah I got sprite work clogging my time at the moment.
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Should'a known. What game are you doing spriting for by the way? Or are you doing sprite animations?
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Spriting for a paying project, and working on my own https://www.patreon.com/urimasebonheart
Also trying to learn 3D modeling and animating.
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God damn... I can see how that takes up your time. So chapters will take up to a whole year now?
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dunno to be honest. might even drop or pass on a few stories as I know I won't be able to continue all of them. I tried running a donation page to allow me to write more but out of my 900ish followers, only two donated. So I was forced to find sprite work instead and cut my writing time.
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If you're going to have to do that.... at least keep Kirsarnia, This story, and Godly. Those are my absolute favorites from you and they make it into my top 15 stories. Kirsarnia being #13, this being #11 and godly being #12. But honestly? I'd say each are 10. All equal at my 10th spot. I would be extremely sad if you couldn't continue them. I bet a good amount of others would be to. I mean, why are all the, in my opinion, stupid fucking one shots and stories with barely any alterations if any to the show so fucking popular as opposed to ones like these which are ACTUALLY a good read? Things like THIS story are FAR better than those to me. Because it allows much more compared to those others in most, but not all, cases. Least that's my opinion.
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Thank you for putting a smile on my face. I would love to write more, but without donations I can't do it often these days. Gotta pay dem bills.
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Straight amazing my dude. This story is too good. I hope the next chapters come out soon.
come on,where is the next chapter
Next chapter when?