My sister left the fridge open again, so I now have to go down to the store to buy new milk and shit. I get there just fine and start filling my shopping basket when a guy with a gun enters and starts demanding money...
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Loved the story so far, and i find it very cute that Celestia thinks she can harm Damien knowing he would stop all her attempts simply by commanding her to stop
Finally I've been waiting on this good job see you next chapter
NICE!!!!! i missed this story!!! Glad your back bro.
Why do I expect something to happen that "Convinces" *heavy sarcasm* Gilda to go with them?
*sigh* Well... there goes another town, if I'm reading the foreshadowing correctly.
This story is awesome! I'm gonna read it from the start again.
They grey-water is about to hit the oscillating device. again.
Loving this story so much!
5 bucks says Shining Armor never even mentions Gilda in those letters. Can't wait for the next update.
7825021 20 bucks
Keep up these amazing chapters!
You shouldnt have put this chapter up without the next being written already u need to stay ahead
7827524 What? Oh you mean the authors note? I know what I have planned, I was just being an ass.
7827836 is that truly necessary?
7831048 I can't leave playful banter in my notes?
7831480 Well, it's in my experience that you can do what you want...
I Began to read this today. I Tried to go to the next chapter only to realize...
THAT'S ALL HE WROTE SO FAR?!
7831480 there there no need to cry want a hug
7835496 *Glomps you*
7831480 Alright We guess you can
7833880 funny yet wtf
There are numerous spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the chapters but somehow the story makes up for it. Its one of the story where how it's being told just captivates your imagination. I'm really enjoy the adventure, though perhaps you could give us some shorts or flashback moments in the future which cover Damien's past on Earth and the sixty years he spent conquering hell. Some more screen time, for lack of better term, for his children's exploits would be fantastic. I look forward to the next chapter?
7854520 I plan to do that next chapter actually. He starts remembering things while waiting for Gilda.
Me olvidé de que dusk estaba ahí
"Your words are meaningless to me. As long as you don't send people to kill me or those I care about for no reason anymore, I don't care what you think."
"It seems being mind controlled by your enemy and me beating you twice in battle for your own good failed to instill the concept of shame in you. For such a shameful excuse for a leader, you are quite shameless, aren't you?"