My sister left the fridge open again, so I now have to go down to the store to buy new milk and shit. I get there just fine and start filling my shopping basket when a guy with a gun enters and starts demanding money...
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Awesome chapter.
Applejack's demonic transformation was less dramatic than expected. I kind of hope she will be a special type of demon.
8093017 She's a lesser demon. Nothing dramatic about it really. Pinkie became a draconequus due to her large amount of hidden magic and energy. Rarity later will go though a different change when they get to Fel Haven.
Lulz on Rare's reaction at the end!!!
I hope some jackass hasn't started a rebellion, mostly for the would-be rebels' sakes. :P
Just a request, but can you make Damien realise how much of his humanity he's lost? If any. Oh, and a backstory just made of feels for Ebonwing, cuz i feel like he has a horrid lesson engraved into his brain, so it kinda made him lash out at whoever. pls? yu dont have to, but pwease???
Will Damien have another form or something? Because right now it seems pinkie is the strongest in the group.
8093487 Pinkie is just an archdemon, Luna, Selene, Desire, and Damien still have more power than her. Pinkie can't create something for long and doesn't have nearly as much magic or energy as the demonlords, so if there was a fight, she'd lose to the stronger demons.
Are you ever going to address how inhuman Damien has become? He casually enslaves people all the time...
Two things:
1. Makes me wonder what a spa looks like in hell....Nothing pretty comes to mind.
2. Damien vs. Doomguy....Doomguy would win in my book but hey, it's just my opinion.
8094215 Well he's punishing the harpy for what she tried to do but will eventually let her have her freedom back. And yes, he's lost most of his humanity. Remember, he's been a demon much longer than he has a human.
8094446 always enjoy these chaps. MOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEE!!!!!!
if thats ok with you....
I hate when I really get into a good story, and run out of chapters.
8103330 I know that feeling.
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I am really enjoying this story man, you're a great writer! Pinkie turning into a draconeques had to be one of my favorite parts. Best story I've read in awhile. Keep up the good work!
Too bad, I reached and read the 37 chapter...
Well, a couple of things I noted...
1- Damien forgot about Discord, he was near when he took Celestia, it's too bad, even when they can go back in any moment thanks to Pinkie.
2- I wonder what is going to think Cadence... If this is pre-season 3, she was in Canterlot and could have joined the party
3- I have the strange image of Discord parading in a general uniform and pinkie saluting and saying "Yes Discord-Sensei!"
I've had this in my favourites for a week or two now and only started reading it yesterday. I almost regret that decision. I should have started earlier. I dunno exactly what did it, but something in this about this story just makes me so giddy to see the next chapter. I love the fic so far and am very excited to see what you do with it in the future.
My only big complaint, which is something so trivial that it doesnt bother me (but I like to include at least one con), is that 60 year skip in chapter 10. I know its to late to fix it, but perhaps later on, after you finish this story, you could do a short sequel that follows more of the war for Tartarus, as a small summary definitely leaves more to be wanted.
Other than that, I really do love your work and ask that you continue till finishing.
I. DEMAND. media.giphy.com/media/VT9DTMhEv5aQU/giphy.gif
8125716 I could add interlude chapters while Damien is having dreams about his past.
8127186 OooOoh, like a PTSD type of thing?
8127777 Well, more like a nightmare when I'll do the flashback about Adderine. But it'll just be him remembering things while asleep.
8128264 Oh. Okay. That makes sense.