My sister left the fridge open again, so I now have to go down to the store to buy new milk and shit. I get there just fine and start filling my shopping basket when a guy with a gun enters and starts demanding money...
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Great story and character development chapter ^_^
Ooh, what kind of dessert? I personally like Pie.
MORE!!!
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Oops, fixed.
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I'm not Christian. I believe in no gods or religions! THIS CHAT SPARE BE FREE OF SUCH HERETICS!!! Wait...
Poor Mel, thanks for waiting in the clop... Also, I loved it
I wonder what could ponies do if he did tried to bring the holy bible to Equestria.
You know I've read everything up to this point and I'm sorry but Damien needs to lose someone close to him. He's killed all those guards and justified it as us or them. They had families too and were doing everything to protect them from Celestias so called demon invasion. In the end he killed all those guards but spared Celestia. What couldn't of spared a lot of those guards by knocking them out over killing. Yah she was being corrupted by what "a demon". But in the end he and Celestia gets off scott free and other ponies pay the price. Hell he even gets twilight outta the deal. She wouldn't of got shot if they hadn't killed all those guards. Let me see let's listen to the DEMON that's killed like 50 of us all ready. Maybe if he had murdered less they woulda been less trigger happy and more willing to let's say listen to twilight orders. Her getting shot was a consequence of his prior actions. What happens she gets shot and now she's his. Something bad needs to happen to him so he can understand consequences. I know he didn't ask to be summoned to equestria. But come on should he be surprised that those guards tried to spear him... he's from tarturus demons are murderous assholes and he knows it is he surprised they tried to kill him demons have tried for 60+ years for less valid reasons. He just loves fighting killing and sex he never stopped being human. At least he improved tarturus that's some consolation.
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He has lost someone over the years. His sister in law Adderine. It's one of the main reasons he's so quick to kill first to protect those he cares for. He'd rather kill them than lose his loved ones again.
SPOLIER: Although I do plan for him to compensate the families of the dead guards when he returns to Equus later,
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I remembered about his sister in law but that lesson apparently didn't settle in.I know why he did it he was protecting his loved ones. But he coulda tried incapacitating over killing ... he's a demon lord he coulda blown a limb off or broke there arms. He was always worrying about the silver guess what .... get some armor. Silver's a weak metal. Damn it didn't even need to be good armor. He killed a dragon use it's scales. Make hide armor. Hymn...he can't raise the dead otherwise his sister in law would still be around... so compensating.... If your saying he's gonna throw money at it to make it all right I'll be very disappointed in you ...lol. I still think how he got twilight was pretty shitty thou .. it screams dubious consent to me. Well starting out anyway. I'd rather she loved desire and he was included because it's a package deal. I know she grew to love him but it just felt like if she hadn't of been transformed they would never had been an item. Which i know is why she was transformed so they would in the story.
put jello in your panties
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Oh yes. Fluttershy won't forgive Celestia that easily. Her animal friends were like children to her. Would you forgive someone who got them all killed? I know I wouldn't. Despite Celestia being manipulated by Tirek's lingering magic, it was still Celestia's hatred for demons and paranoia that pushed her to do it.
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No not money. An apology to start with, but I have other ideas in mind.
He also has his suit of fel iron armour he used to storm Fel Haven when he killed Val'Hades. He just didn't have it with him on Equus at the time. But it wouldn't hurt to have wards or runes for added protection.
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I see what you did there. You ain't foolin' me!
This is a awesome chapter.
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Good point and also please tell me that Damien isn't actually "The Devil" cause I don't want to bring my brother to your world. His name is Inferno D. Dovahkinn and he is a nephalem, an angel/demon hybrid and he hates The Devil with a burning passion and will do anything to put him down for good. I'm giving you warning. 😇
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I'm Christian and I would bring ponies together to learn about God 🙏🏾😇
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Oh no i know he didn't have it his armor that is ...but the dragon was before the confrontation with the elements and a dragon hide tunic wouldn't of been that hard to make. Skin it. Dry the underside over a fire. Poke a whole for his head and get something to tie the sides down ...bamn ...armor. it wouldn't be masterwork but the arrows woulda bounced oh his chest and upper legs.
Sorry to much dnd lol
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You might also forget that the silver armour and weapons like Shining's when they first met might have some strong enchantments to make it more durable and less soft or brittle.
i like this chapter lol it's funny what desire did ( slap do ever call your self a whore for what you need to do to survive) looking forward to the next chapter
I can't wait to get more updates, this story is one of the reasons I started writing in the first place and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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Glad to hear it. I actually read your Prince of Darkness story but forgot most of it due to last update was Feb. (I know you released a new chapter and I'll have to reread the story from the beginning again).
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muhahaha nope didn't forget... dragons have natural magic resistances, plus they wouldn't be counting on him killing a dragon and using it's hide so their enchantments that are set for demons might not be as effective on dragon hide. ^^ Only reason why damien beat one he was naturally stronger and his ??Hel-fire was it called ability that practically melted the dragon.
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Darkfire it's called.
As for dragon scales... the dragon he killed is most likely gone now since he threw it off the mountain and it was either lost, scattered, or someone else salvaged its remains.
Spike × Mel
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We can't reneg anyway it's past and done it'd just be weird to have a redo that far back. Was just saying back then he coulda redid things better but he just forgot his human ingenuity. He brought guns to tarturus but forgets hide armors what a dork ... lol
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Yea I'm a little sad I haven't updated in a while but since I got a new job I've had to put most of my hobbies on the back burner for a while. hopefully I can start posting regularly again soon.
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shhhhhhh
Hey, if Desire is an Alicorn demon now and not a Succupony, why does she still need to eat lust? Or does she still?
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Mel is royalty now, so she should get a harem. With multiple dudes.
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She became an alicorn whilst being a succupony, so she still has the traits of one but just not as strongly. Even if she didn't, it wouldn't stop her from banging Damien whenever she wanted. Luna/Selene/Celestia became alicorns before turning into demons from being unicorns/pegasi, thus they don't have succupony instincts.
I like first person in Mel's perspective; how long's it gonna last?
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Next chapter will be her perspective as well as she explores the city and meets her nephews and nieces.
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Awesome.
*long intake*AAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHH!!!! IM SOH HAPPEH!!!!!! HE GOT HIS SISTAH BACK!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Again grate chapter! I didn't read for a bit cause I was letting some chapters build up but this was pretty damn good! Can't wait for more.
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Yeah, and I get that. But using that logic you don't get to claim to be in the right. You're a demon, something synonymous with evil for most beings. The way you've portrayed most higher-ranked demons, everyone is in the right for trying to Smite Evil first and ask questions never. The way you do the same (and worse by most standards) just because you personally don't like the people you're doing it to actually makes you worse villain. That the pirate tried to take the crew as slaves is actually kinda understandable, considering the person that seems to be in charge wasn't in the mood for even trying to make nice. What else was he going to do, let a potentially hostile force into his city?
Then again, you are a demon in this fic. Evil is supposed to be your default setting.
I'm not so bent up about this, it just struck me as odd.
Wouldnt he mark her and bund her soul to his so she cant get killed or taken control of?