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Glacier_Mane


My name is Glacier Mane and I am a very creative pony. As of now I am writing a Fan Fiction that deals with Fallout Equestria! It will be my first Fan Fiction so here goes nothing!!!!

Comments ( 51 )

An interesting start, I'll keep an eye on this one.

Chapter 1 is being edited right now, I'm going for at least a chapter a week

I'm liking this one!

7288383 let me know what you think of the new chapter

7288266 let me know what you think of the new chapter

So far it's going pretty good! I'm excited to see just how good this story will get.

You got my attention. Added to my Read Later list.

7293571 Now if only I could get more thumbs up right

7293674 Eh. Nothing you can't achieve. I experienced the same with my own story, so I took it down to work on it by trapping my editors in my basement with no food or water and forced them to work on it until it'll be better.

This story's going pretty good. A couple of grammar errors, but none the less, still excellent! I'm excited to see where you take this in the next few chapters! :twilightsmile:

7297665 yeah my editor is taking her sweet time lol. You see she is a teacher and now school is out she will have more time to edit

Not reading this story... yet, but let me just say that '744' is more than there are Vaults in the Fallout world.

Also I too have a Fallout: Equestria fic, it's called FALLOUT EQUESTRIA: THE LIGHTBRINGER and has 1 complete chapter.

7322891 I will say this according to the Fallout Equestria wiki there has to be lol also I will definitely check your story out

If your interested in seeing any stories I have one, and I will definitely check yours out when I'm not to busy writing.

7325381 I think I have started reading your story lol. But I will definitely check it out

7322991 Another excellent chapter! Not too sure about all of the clop and all of that, but the rest was perfect!!!

7332179 lol well I'm going to be spacing the clop out a little more don't worry things are about to shift into another gear!

7356790 yeah I was aiming for 1 chapter a week, however, I like having more time to write. Clop will be in the story intermittently so it still has readability that's not smut driven.

7381383 well chapter III had the most clop as of right now.

7384590 You know what I mean. They all great, I just don't want to say the same complement/result over and over again, so I mix it up. 'Pretty good' was the first thing that I drew out of the pile (even if it wasn'tt hat fitting), so yeah :twilightsheepish:

7384630 lol I'm just giving you shit. I look forward to seeing your comments every time I put up a new chapter

7384929 Thank you, I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter! :pinkiesmile:

Damn! S**t's about to hit the fan!

Nice way to end part one! I got to admit, I wasn't expecting it to end like that! Good job.

7463913 thank you. Part 2 will have its own Prologue to introduce you back into the story. I am wanting to put up both part 2's prologue and chapter VII at the same time as to not give anything away. So just sit tight hopefully I can have them both up in a week or two

This was the beginning of my long journey.

Then twenty gak commercials.

First of all: I noticed some improper punctuation in this prologue, not too terrible but worth pointing out.

Second of all:

Trotten wants to eliminate any homosexual ponies in the stable!

“So now that we are all smashed and horny,” she said noting that my body was showing signs of both, “Let's start fucking!” It didn't take me too long to agree to this plan.

Before I could respond she wrapped her mouth around my cock.

It took everything I had not to lose my composure right then and there. Her tongue trailed my stallion-hood’s length multiple times.

7490823 I get the feeling it's the first read through for you. Lol.

I do have a few grammatical errors and mistakes throughout the story but I think I'm getting better. Also I get the feeling you don't like clop. Although sex is a natural thing it won't be visited a lot through out the rest of the story.

You also went heavy on videos in your comments that's neat really gets to the point lol.

Thanks for reading!

7490251 I feel that the epilogue came out a little cheesy. Especially at the end. But Horizon and Cyen will be part of the main cast from here on to the foreseeable future.

Good chapter! I like it that Luna is still able to help ponies, even if it's just in spirit and when the pony(s) are close to death. If I had to use an out of ten rating, I'd say around a 8/10!

7529425 yep it sure seems that way I'm working on the next chapter and it'll be even crazier I hope! Glad you are enjoying the ride!

Good chapter! Definetly some interesting ideas you put forth, such as star getting her own body and Overstallion Glacier becoming a cyborg alicorn.

7548701 sometimes my own ideas keep me up at night lol.

The idea of a Psuedo alicorn was one I played with and I wasn't sure how I was going to like it but I think I have a good direction I am going in. As always I hope you continue to enjoy

"I want to be an Alicorn when I wake up, Dusty"

Well, I guess that's the new 'I want to be a princess'! :D

7583980 lol yeah I guess so :rainbowlaugh: I just started working on chapter IX so that should be good I'm trying to set this story far away from the events of the original story. And a direction gets finalized pretty early in the chapter. As for the other characters Horizon will have an interesting backstory that will bring a new dynamic in as well. I'm wanting this part of the story to kind of be nice and easy not too exciting. As it is probably easy to see but EQUIS has kind of went silent, that won't be for long. The winds are about to change will Glacier be a good Alicorn prince? Who knows? Well I do, of course.

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