This is the story of Glacier Mane, overstallion of Stable 744. Join him as he journeys across the wastes to battle for security and ultimate superiority. Raider ponies are not the only faction to be feared.
7490823 I get the feeling it's the first read through for you. Lol.
I do have a few grammatical errors and mistakes throughout the story but I think I'm getting better. Also I get the feeling you don't like clop. Although sex is a natural thing it won't be visited a lot through out the rest of the story.
You also went heavy on videos in your comments that's neat really gets to the point lol.
7490251 I feel that the epilogue came out a little cheesy. Especially at the end. But Horizon and Cyen will be part of the main cast from here on to the foreseeable future.
Then twenty gak commercials.
7490823 I get the feeling it's the first read through for you. Lol.
I do have a few grammatical errors and mistakes throughout the story but I think I'm getting better. Also I get the feeling you don't like clop. Although sex is a natural thing it won't be visited a lot through out the rest of the story.
You also went heavy on videos in your comments that's neat really gets to the point lol.
Thanks for reading!
7490251 I feel that the epilogue came out a little cheesy. Especially at the end. But Horizon and Cyen will be part of the main cast from here on to the foreseeable future.