Fire Streak becomes an teacher. Time to say good bye to the Wonderbolts.
(prequel to "Newbie Dash")
Looking for proof reader / Bad at writting in english.
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Not half bad, although I can't see Spitfire cheating somepony's test scores as that looks a bit like favortisim and I don't think somepony like Spitfire would do that. My only other main problem is that this fic seems a bit too short as well.
What is the name of the book the picture is from?
Wow, people find the ability to write a fic based on the flimsiest of premises. I liked it, so have an upvote. :)
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I am trying to work through a writer's blockade. I am just glad I was able to put out anything half readable. I am a bit surprised noone called Fire Streak a Gary Stu to be honest.
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I just didn´t wanted to write/read another `SHITfire´ so I turned her into something different. Glad you liked it.
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I have no idea, I stumbled over the picture as I looked for pictures of Surprise.
7201079 Writer's block does suck doesn't it? Yeah, I've had this problem before and I find myself lucky I put out something at all.
Hello! Have a review. I like the setup for this story, as I'd occasionally wondered what happened with Fire Streak's retirement. Spitfire, as others have said, seems a bit OOC though.