Duplicate section about three quarters in.

So she gets a hint of the hive mind, huh? Well, a bigger one than during the transformation anyways. Keep going! ;)

7265198 Eh heh... Yeah... sorry... It's late here.... I'll fix them up...

Amazing chapter! Keep up the good work!

Usually you have to first ask to pass a test via fucking. *Eyebrow wiggle*

Great chapter.

Awsome Chapters ^^

Hmmmm I dont know should i feel sorry for him or not (I hope that really comes across)

Very well written.

I finally got around to reading this. It's actually fairly interesting and the premise is pretty unique in how clerical it's treating the subject. I'd like to read more.

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Dirty Deal, Done Dirt Cheap

This is the power of my [ S U T A N D U ]

8018745 Yeaaaaaah.... I'm not sure if it is a bad habit or something, but i put ellipses in whenever I think there should be a pause in speech that wouldn't necessarily stop the sentence/phrasing. It is probably a really bad habit though...

8020155 Is this story going to ever update or is it basically abandon, because the plot is actually quiet intriguing and i am curious as to how it will end

8143440 It isn't a main project that I will be putting a lot of writing into... It is more likely a sort of side project, that I will work on when I get the inspiration for it or can't think of anything else... I am sort of focused on another project of mine, but who knows. Cause I sure don't. I will tell you that it will update when I get around to it... But don't expect it to occupy a lot of my time, just be pleasantly surprised.

8143917 alright thank you