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Something Something Poni


I'm new to the fandom, but I hope to make up for lost time.

Sep
30th
2015

Rarity's Makeover. · 8:16am Sep 30th, 2015

When I submitted this story to the site, I thought it was going to be accepted with open arms, but I noticed it hasn't been well-received.

And who do I blame for this?

Why myself, of course.

Reflecting on the story, I think I made the main character too hostile, and too unsympathetic. The open-ended nature of the ending must have disappointed people too, but I want to make a sequel, not a chapter continuation.

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Why would you call it mediocre? It was great in my opinion.

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You are most welcome. I wish you the best with your time here on the site and in the community!:twilightsmile:

Hello there! Welcome to FIMFiction.:pinkiesmile:

I see that Silver is doing a good job of helping you out, but if you need any help figuring out how the site works, don't be afraid to ask. I'm always happy to help, and we're all glad that you are here!:twilightsmile:

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