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This story is a sequel to Unicorn Horns Are Made Of Candy


Now that the ponies of Equestria have realized that unicorn horns are made of candy, they can finally get down to solving the real issue: what to do about horn rot. Is brushing the answer? Sweetie Belle hopes to find out.

Written for ocalhoun's Big 250k Contest.

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Awww, that story was so sweet!:trollestia:

Horngasms will now be dangerous to a unicorn's health.

Cute, but underwhelming ending. Still, a like you get.

I was hoping g for more. If she had questions go to Spike who delivers letters directly to Celestia and have her answer Sweetie's questions

Well, a simple premise, not really anything beyond that, and then it's over. I really feel like more could have (and should have) been done with this idea of horn rot. Or at least something to give the story a bit of tension or suspense. Right now, there's just not much there. The other ones so far were okay, but this one really feels like it was thrown together quickly just for another contest entry.

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