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Now, THIS is a chapter and a half. But no seriously your story is quite enjoyable, not a lot of conflict but a lot of interesting scenes. Your pacing is perfect and I absoloutley ADORE the main antagonist. The inability to return to ultramar or to the empire with a possible weapon aginst chaos and a power to bring back the emperor into the battle. Great story. You get a rating of FORTHEEMPTROR/10 my good sir.
WE DEMAND BEWWY WUBS!
I like your... cover art.
Maybe Discord will help after he is reformed. After all, he would likely want to make the galaxy safe for Fluttershy to live in.
Really, it seems more likely that the humans who left decided to grant their pets intelligence. Perhaps the ponies were already as intelligent as dolphins or elephants and we decided to gift them by pushing them into true intelligence for their companionship. Humans love their pets, after all.
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but seriously, fix that.
Cuddles for the Cuddle-God! Snuggles for the Snuggle Throne!
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(Sarcasm)I really hate you, but at least it made me laugh
Get rekt. Humans (post-humans) 1, Ponies 0. Unless you count all this friendship progress they had made, in which case the ponies are WAY ahead.
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So you don't hate him but he didn't make you laugh.
Big Mek...pfffft 😂👌
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Wazamaka's nickname
I wonder how Little Kitten, the Fabstodes and Boy would react to the ponies?
How... unpleasend...
Pffff hehehehe an spacemarine scratching noses... that Sounds like fun xD
> "Forgiven. Tell me, what do you want?"
What. Is it because he's not really conscious? I mean, this is a serious, maximum-top-priority stop-doing-this thing.
I 'd like to think that ponies will be integrated back into the imperium and they'll be treated like Canids from the humorous "Regimental Standard"
"Prostrate yourself before the Emperor, and I shall rub your abdomen in reward for your humility"
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"I am demonstrating to you the TRUE POWER OF THE IMPERIUM, THROUGH THE USE OF SMALL FLUFFY ANIMALS!"
Can’t would fit better than cannot
Wait Roboute Guilliman was revived in 999.M41 and the story takes place in 039M42. Shouldn't he have been back for like 40 years by this point?
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News travels very slowly in the 40th Millennia.