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Action Ahoy!
Ha, sweet revenge!
well as long he wont give any technology from mankind sou it wont be counted as tech heresy.
You didn't know? Ponies love tasty flowers.
Pony baneblade
I can't be the only one that thinks this is inappropriate, right?
Amazing as always, well worth the wait.
I've started a similar story called Lost Loyalty about a 12th legion loyalist from Istvaan 3. I would appreciate it if you would give it a look-see.
This doesn't really make sense. Yes, it's good to split up the chain of command to different areas so it can't be destroyed in one fell swoop, but "Captain" and "Sergeant" shouldn't really be split up, especially when the others were sent out with no rank. They can't create a company if they have no rank of their own to command their forces.
A logical command structure would be Luna > Antonius > General > Commander > Lieutenant > Captain > Sergeant > Soldier > Recruit. In a best-case scenario, every soldier within the command structure would have their own rank. The command structure isn't just for delegation, it's also so that if someone higher-up in the structure is MIA/KIA, there's always someone everyone else can look to. Luna missing? Look to Antonius. Antonius missing? Look to General. General missing? Look to Commander. So on and so forth. The Command Structure ensures commands are given to the soldiers quickly and efficiently so that chaos doesn't ensue. Chaos in a command structure can and will lead to the quick death of lots of soldiers as they don't know what to do.
I say Captain and Sergeant shouldn't really be split up because those two ranks are close together. The higher up the rung the rank is, the less soldiers have that rank, and the more they should be split up. The closer two ranks are, the less they should be split up. You wouldn't split up Recruits and Soldiers because the Recruits have to take direct orders from the Soldiers.
For a time, I thought you were going to have Antonius and Luna enter a romantic relationship.
Thank The Emperor you did not.
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Might have been a “test of the waters” to see how readers react to it.
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As a rule, I almost never like human x pony romance, especially with the main cast, especially with the alicorns. It feels wrong to me on several levels, and if any main character is involved, they are always Out Of Character in some way. Granted, almost every fanfiction has some small degree of OOC, but I generally notice more of it in MC x MC/MC x HOC shipping stories.
Mini-rant over.In short; you did good, Author, and I dislike most inter-species romance for varying reasons.
Now I'm off into the realm of dreams. Till we meet again, virtual adventurers!
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Technically, a unicorn's magic beam varies in power from a little sting to Starlight's Kamehameha Wave.
And this is a foal, so it would sting a bit, but only as much as a plastic BB (still a little shit head though.)
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It would feel ooc for a space marine at that
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True.
Also, you forgot to punctuate your sentence.
Something just occurred to me. Considering how much the ancient humans favored the ponies, they probably left behind some kind of planetary defense system to ward off potential invasions. That would be very useful to find in the near future.
And they have yet to find the original Golden/Dark Age base.
Ah, the begining of the Planetary Defence Force...
Another 20 years and we could get this...
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Is it heresy?
...
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I get that the main enemies/antagonists are Chaos, but i woulda started with the Orks.
Nuthin’ beats a good Crumpin’ to make a point.
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It would make more sense if their ranks would grow by the number of the pdf
I agree, each of them should be captain at the least. When there are some hundreds of soldiers/recruits this 13 should climb the ranks while new captains and sergeant pop up while they get a couple strategists in Canterlot for Generals.
At some point they should inform the rest of the planet though then they can create bigger armies
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OOOHHH!!! Men of Iron do sound fun.
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What, do you mean kastellan robots or mechanicums battle automatas? Because thous still needs either human brain or operator like data smith. Because all forms of artificial intelligence (Abominable intelligence) is illegal by the orders of emperor himself. Sou technically there cannot be robots from imperiums era.
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FORTIFY! SIEGE!
FORTIFY! SIEGE!
FORTIFY! SIEGE!
FORTIFY! SIEGE!
repeat ad nauseum for 10,000 years.
Hey, are you still alive?
It's been over a month since the last update.
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Okay that good me good xD