I'm a lazy writer who loves what I do, but is too lazy to write half the time. If you have an idea for a story, shoot it at me though. I just might take it♥
Applejack's parents have never been around-travelers, if you will. Searching for new types of apples, sending back about two new types a year. But when she receives the letter saying her Ma and Pa are gone, comfort comes from strange places.
Written for Thirty Minute Pony Prompts Tumblr, #13-Why is Applejack Crying?
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It was pretty good, I would have liked if it was a bit longer, but still, great job.
Good story. Felt a bit rushed, but yeah. Also, Fluttershy? You mean Twilight? :P
It's a nice story little story.
Only complaint is I wish it were a little longer, then if you have a change of heart and decide to make other chapters for this then please do so.
I can find no glaring errors, save one: it's marked complete. This is an obvious falsehood. It just doesn't have a conclusion right now. If a story has an intro, a middle, a climax, and an end, we're not even halfway through the middle yet. (At least, this is my emotions speaking.)
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I assume it was written in only 30 mins, considering what it was written for "Thirty Minute Pony Prompts Tumblr"
Nice story, though I thought it was ended abruptly, I think it was really well written, also considering the short time you had
Very good but it doesn't feel complete with the sudden ending. We dont even know if they raised the money or not in time. I understand you had a time limit but it needs more.
I'm going to be adding to it, but the chapter itself was for the tumblr. Of course, it wasn't approved within six hours, so I can just continue anyways.
YES!!!
Not yes about them being sad, but yes about the story continuing
EDIT: Didn't see yesterdays comment, I just assumed this would be ending cause it was one of those 30 minute ones, and are usually written as one shots, however finished they feel.