I'm a lazy writer who loves what I do, but is too lazy to write half the time. If you have an idea for a story, shoot it at me though. I just might take it♥
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Sweetie Belle is a brave filly. Reasonable, levelheaded, and terribly afraid of storms. When the Pegasi schedule a thunderstorm with hail that is threatening to lose control of itself at any moment, she completely panics. Rarity comes along and shows her how nothing is really panic worthy.
One-shot, written as I sit here cowering from a storm that basically follows the above description.
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Send some of that rain my way!
I love it when I come across these little beauty's of one-shots on the first page! Very nice! Emotional, and it definitely plays out that Slice of Life tag.
/throws rain at you.
Merry Christmas.
@Extantdread-
Thank you. I really tried to get at emotions here, though I feel it faltered towards the end.
I enjoy little one shots like this
! One little criticism I have is that I think it's a little bit awkward when Sweeties Belle says "Nuh-uh! I ain't scared of no storm!". Sweetie Belle just probably wouldn't be one to say ain't. Out of all of the CMC the most likely to say it would be Apple Bloom. It's just a minor gripe though, I enjoyed the story nonetheless 
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I really enjoyed it
But as TheBaraclough said, I think the the bit with Sweetie Belle was a tad bit awkward. But the story was good, cute and just a very nice story altogether
/steals Pinkies too.
I'll edit that after school, gotta catch the bus~
Awwww, that was such a sweet story.
There need to be more simple one-shot stories with Rarity and Sweetie Belle like this on the site.
A nice little tale of sisterly bonding. I'd be interested in a bit more reasoning as to why she was afraid (kids often have really wacky ideas!), but still, very sweet.