• Member Since 11th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 2nd, 2019

Twilicorn


I'm a lazy writer who loves what I do, but is too lazy to write half the time. If you have an idea for a story, shoot it at me though. I just might take it♥

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Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle were always the closer friends of the CMC's. Now they're roommates in Canterlot, where Sweetie studies music and Scootaloo works anywhere she can to put food on the table. Not anywhere anywhere, modest places! Despite this, Scootaloo still lacks a few things. Primarily? Oh, a cutiemark and the ability to truly fly. She's like Fluttershy at the Hurricane, as Rainbow Dash harshly put it. Then Sweetie Belle... well, she drunkenly comes on to Scootaloo. Madness ensues.

I don't know anyone who could draw coverart.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 22 )

I have a happy feeling about this one. Good luck with it.

not bad. quite short, but still nice. upvote and fave

Can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy:

A very promising start! Can't wait to read more! :twilightsmile:

Moar please!
Not getting enough Scootabelle!

Not bad, not bad at all.
I'd like more back-story and more transitions and descriptions. But that's just me:twilightsheepish:
It has a massive amount of potentialdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png

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If only the people who saw this when it was published agreed -__-.

1871765 If I were the author i wouldn't know what her cutiemark would be either. except maybe like a scooter or something.

F.S. Braveheart? Know where you got that from.

.___________. Im still following this

Is there any chance of this continuing?

Very nice, but a signal of time transition would be helpful. Like a --------- in between paragraphs that take place at different times. Also seems just a tad rushed, but overall very nice.:twilightsmile:

Looking forward to the next chapter! :moustache:

So the fist chapter was made around 2 years ago and its incomplete is there a chance you may continue this story, or is it on haitius or cancelled? :pinkiesad2::fluttercry:

5127125 i agree, this fic is off to an amazing start.
:flutterrage:MOAR!!!!...please:fluttershyouch:.

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He has never come back online.....

6560442 I know:fluttercry:, and I think I replied to the wrong comment there:facehoof:.

This is dead. Has to be. Shame, it's pretty good.

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*follows anyway*

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