• Published 24th Nov 2011
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A Broken Bloom - Cinnamon Clover



Now unable to walk after a crusade gone wrong, Apple Bloom must adjust to her new life.

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A Wish Come True

"App... can...hear me" said a voice.

Apple Bloom felt groggy and could not place where the voice was coming from, let alone who was saying it. Everything was a blur. After a moment or two the events that lead up to this came back to her.

"Huh, what did ya say?" she asked.

"I asked- nevermind" the stallion doctor replied, "You should be able to leave in the morning for the rehabilitation center in Ponyville. You're sister and friends are here to see you. Should I let them in?"

"Can Ah just talk with Apple Jack for a few minutes?" the yellow filly asked.

The doctor just nodded in response before leaving the room.

"Hey sis, nice ta see that ya woke up!" AJ exclaimed as she entered the room.

"AJ, ah just wanted ta thank ya... for everything ya have done ta help me after the accident." the filly thanked the element of honesty sincerely as she embraced her in a hug.

"No prob, Sugarcube!" the orange farm pony replied happily before breaking the hug.

"Would it be ok if ah could talk to Sweetie and Scoot for a few minutes?" the small filly requested.

"Sure, Sugarcube." the orange mare agreed before exiting the room.

Moments later, Apple Bloom found herself being bear hugged by her friends.

"It's...nice...ta...see...ya...too...can't...breathe!" she choked out.

"Oh, sorry" Sweetie Belle apologized as she and Scootaloo let go their grip around their friend.

"Ah can't thank y'all enough for all ya did for me." Apple Bloom spoke calmly.

"Don't mention it! What are friends for!" Scootaloo grinned.

"Yeah, we're gonna be Cutie Mark Crusaders Best Friends Forever!" Sweetie cheered


Epilogue


It had now been six months since Apple Bloom's return from Canterlot. Her recovery went smoothly as expected. The Cutie Mark Crusaders had just finished for the day. Everything was back to normal.

Comments ( 9 )

Is this the end of the storyline ? :pinkiegasp:

Because based upon the last like of the tale it makes me wonder whether or not this story is finish, isn't it ? :fluttershysad:

THIS story is finished. I never said anything about what comes after it!:pinkiehappy:

759687
Bah! You're just fishing for a "Watch".

...

You succeeded. *Clicks the button*

Disappointingly short.
I was done before my background music had finished the opening.
Whatever, still well written but you should make it a bit longer next time

759687
Nevermind, this story was near impossible to write. The three-part saga I was planning is cancelled in favor of a much more do-able one. I'm changing the Epilogue so this is really the end.

I really liked this story until the last chapter. For some reason it seemed abrupt. It could have gone more into life for Apple Bloom after the surgery. That's all.

831799 (Frankie)

Hate to break it to you, but that's the most boring part of these kind of operations and I think it would be like if I wrote out the nutrition facts from a cereal box. Boring! Hear the snores already!

I'm just happy you had Applebloom walking again. To have her lose that ability made me very sad.

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I think I would've been able to try to help in the operation, but since you wrote about ponies, I don't think I would know how to repair a horse's broken bone/femur/nerve.

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