A Broken Bloom

by Cinnamon Clover

Bearer of Bad News

Chapter 2: The Bearer of Bad News

At this point all of her friends had joined them in the hospital room. Though she still felt very sore, she refused to show it in front of her friends. They could see the pain in her eyes though. It was hard for any of them to see her in such pain. It appeared as though she did not remember what happened. It was confirmed when she mustered up the strength to talk.

"What...what happened?" she asked quietly and nervously.

Her friends gave each other nervous looks upon how to answer this question. Her two closest friends then spoke up, eyes red from tears.

"We tried BASE jumping and-and...-" Sweetie Belle started in between sobs.

"-your parachute didn't open." Scootaloo finished, crying too.

Everypony in the room was crying at this point because they knew the worst of the news was coming up.

"Apple Bloom... there's something else you need to know. The doctor said you ain't never gonna walk again." her sister told her through her tears.

At that news Apple Bloom broke down into tears, not that anyone could blame her. Her friends and family comforted her to the best of their abilities. They all stayed with her till visiting hours were over at which point only AJ was allowed to stay with her sister.

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Later That Night

"It's my fault!" hollered an angry Scootaloo. Not angry at Apple Bloom, no angry at herself for suggesting something so dangerous that it could get her friends hurt.

Comments

[Balancer]

This is so emotionally taxing to read

[Cinnamon Clover]

Yeah I typed the first chapter and entire story outline up in the middle of the night after getting a very convincing idea in a dream. It's bound to have some mistakes. And I'd never tear the cmc up! They are my faves! CMC BASE jumpers! YA-wait why isn't Apple Bloom moving? OH NO!

[PegaSister]

Very moving. Sadly, no tears came forth, but a hollow feeling spread in my stomach :(

[Sweetie_Belle_Derelle]

First gifsoup.com/view5/2570235/pinkie-pie-breakdown-o.gif

[Sweetie_Belle_Derelle]

Second, make it longer.

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[negativezero]

really touching please continue

[mbpony 512]

That is tough and I can see this putting a strain on the friendship between the Cutie Mark Crusaders for quite some time,

Please do keep up the good work upon such an interesting storyline like this one.

[tubaguy]

lack of soul is failing me, cant bear, fuuuuuuck

[Rainbow87dash]

229695 welcome to the Internet please leave your soul and your innocence by the door