Now unable to walk after a crusade gone wrong, Apple Bloom must adjust to her new life.
1st in CMC FanFicees YAY! Series
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And after 8 months voila... It's finally completed!
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:'( sad story
Wow, I'm both sad and Speechless about this storyline idea of yours.
I can see this breaking up the group for awhile given it could be guilt that moviates them to break apart.
Still it was an interesting start to an interesting storyline.
Heart-wrenching beginning to what could possibly be a very touching story. There are a few errors, and lines that could be worded better, for example an idol is someone you look up to idle is a lack of activity.
That being said, I look forward to more
This is so emotionally taxing to read
Yeah I typed the first chapter and entire story outline up in the middle of the night after getting a very convincing idea in a dream. It's bound to have some mistakes. And I'd never tear the cmc up! They are my faves!
CMC BASE jumpers! YA-wait why isn't Apple Bloom moving? OH NO!
Very moving. Sadly, no tears came forth, but a hollow feeling spread in my stomach :(
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Second, make it longer.
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really touching please continue
That is tough and I can see this putting a strain on the friendship between the Cutie Mark Crusaders for quite some time,
Please do keep up the good work upon such an interesting storyline like this one.
Short chapter is an understatement but one thing bothers me.....how can a chapter this short still make me sad
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The chapters are just really short, need to be longer
Good story nonetheless though and hope for more.
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Well yes you do but, let's face it, the CMC are not the most careful, cautious or safe fillies in the world (especially Scoot) and they do some pretty stupid/dangerous stuff in trying to find their cutie marks so yeah... safety optional for those3 fillies.
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I must say this story is really hurting Scootaloo in terms of being a careing friend. I cannot wait to read how she will try to confront Applebloom, or even if she does try.
Still nice update, even if it is a bit sad.
Waaaaaaaaaah! No! Not apple bloom!
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Enjoy it.
I can se Scootaloo going out of her way to try to make Applebloom a bit better to ease the guilt inside her.
NIce update as I wish for you to keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.
lack of soul is failing me, cant bear, fuuuuuuck
da fuck is this
manly tears
how is this possible, i have no soul, NO SOUL DAMMIT, HOW
YES, THANK GOD, MY SOUL CAN BE DEAD AGAIN
Poor Applebloom, injured like that.
I love love love love love love love love this story!!!!!! Most people don't like short stories, but I just love this. Just plain AWESOME!!
happy!
Yay, that the power of true friendship between these three litle fillies.
Keep up the god work.
Just make the chapters a little longer please.
I just love this. When will there be another chapter? But I like it, so I give you my approval.
Is this the end of the storyline ?
Because based upon the last like of the tale it makes me wonder whether or not this story is finish, isn't it ?
THIS story is finished. I never said anything about what comes after it!
Dear Faust, there are Author's Footnotes that are longer than this chapter.
Um, is she in a wheel chair or something? The story does not say. I was just assuming that AJ had set her down in her desk, right up until the Recess segment.
*Edit* Oops.There was a passing reference to a wheel chair last chapter. I guess Applebloom using it at school was implied.
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Bah! You're just fishing for a "Watch".
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You succeeded. *Clicks the button*
Disappointingly short.
I was done before my background music had finished the opening.
Whatever, still well written but you should make it a bit longer next time
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Nevermind, this story was near impossible to write. The three-part saga I was planning is cancelled in favor of a much more do-able one. I'm changing the Epilogue so this is really the end.
I really liked this story until the last chapter. For some reason it seemed abrupt. It could have gone more into life for Apple Bloom after the surgery. That's all.
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Hate to break it to you, but that's the most boring part of these kind of operations and I think it would be like if I wrote out the nutrition facts from a cereal box. Boring! Hear the snores already!
229695 welcome to the Internet please leave your soul and your innocence by the door
I'm just happy you had Applebloom walking again. To have her lose that ability made me very sad.
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I think I would've been able to try to help in the operation, but since you wrote about ponies, I don't think I would know how to repair a horse's broken bone/femur/nerve.