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Cinnamon Clover


A trans dude and masters student just reading.

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Inspired by the Post Crusader blog.
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Set in same universe as the "Believe" series
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After yet another failed attempt at flying, Scootaloo learns the terrible truth. She has aero suspension. She will never become a great stunt flier like her idol. She can never realize her dream of proving to the bullies she is not a flightless bird. She is now and forever, a grounded pegasus.

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Comments ( 10 )

This is very good.
The idea of Aero Suspension is a good one. It gives her a reason for not being able to fly. And she has to take a medication for it, which is a nice touch.
My only comment is that the characters seem emotionally barren. Scootaloo treated AS like it was no big deal, and Pinkie didn't seem too much like her foster mother the way she treated her.
But overall, this is good stuff.

Auto Uprate due to Flightless Scootaloo. Will read after I find this "Sisters" story you mentioned.

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...this is awkward...

:applejackconfused:

There seems to be two stories of yours, both part of two completely different story arcs, which contain the word "Sister" in the title. Which series SHOULD I be reading before starting this story?

Sorry, forgot to change my story page so it says "Believe" series. Check my blog for more info.
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why does rainbow have foals of her own :rainbowderp: i need stories stat!!

Comment posted by Cinnamon Clover deleted Dec 31st, 2012

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This blog post should clear things up for you.

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23 weeks. I have been leaving this aside until I read the proceeding stories in the Believe series, for 23 weeks. I have flat out FAILED TO START reading the Believe series, for 23 weeks.

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Buck it. Lets just do this.

*Reads*

...not nearly as epic as I was hoping, considering the "Flightless Scootaloo" meme I was looking forward to. :pinkiesad2:

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Not even my idea! It's from my favorite pony blog, postcrusade. Warning though, this blog, especially the Scootaloo story line, is not for the faint of heart. Real heavy stuff goes on with our favorite flightless pegasus.

Wait? Boys and girls don't usually mix at sleepovers? Wow.. Somebody shoulda told my friends mom that. Back when we were at an overnight birthday party girls and boys slept in the same room. I slept right next to my crush. Right. Next. To. Him.

Best day of my life. Loved this story by the way!

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