Prince_Morningstar
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I may or may not do an squel based on this but i kinda left it open for one anyway..
The title made me laugh. I've set high expectations.
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I'm going to stop here.
OK, I stop here.
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If you're going to write a fic, make sure you know proper grammar and spelling. If you're going to make a sequel, make sure your story consists of actual humor.
Nice story so far, but you DESPERATELY need an editor
Random capitalization.
Proper nouns; Capitalize.
Should just be a.
Can we bring out the hammer to the groin song?
Thanks. Glad I haven't seen could've V.S. could of. Then I would need to bring out Danny Sexbang.
All this in the description alone.
You should add a description of Krampus, because not everyone seen that movie.
Ok this isn't not bad but it's abit repetive. The payoff was not good because we don't what happen to these ponies, so we no reason to fear he or it.
6807419 why add when you could look it up?
6806780 That's a bit harsh. Humour is subjective and to be fair, he didn't beg you to edit his work. (As far as I know.) That isn't even a piece of constructive criticism. You say that he needs to learn proper grammar and spelling, did you consider that maybe English isn't a first language? I'm not trying to anger you and you don't have to listen but could you just ease up a bit? Fimfiction is about venting creativity and you're surely not making the author feel good when you say these things.
6806745 Here's the killer question! Why is it awful? If you explain, it can improve.
Pretty good, however, you kind of need an editor. There was some kind of bad grammar.
6807457 See the thing is, if you look anything in any media. It's not good story telling
Hey uh, sorry for being kind of an asshat. I know that I shouldn't have harked all over you. Just... Give the story some work, and all is good. :)
11/10 best story neds more humans and krampu.
7/10 needs more naughty ponies
11/10 Best Story Needed more Krampu