"Anyone who has not heard about the ghost, he soon finds out about it in his time." But seriously I am mikele_11 beginner creator of the story.
I welcome you. I am Ortix. God. In fact, it's the thought. The first thought before multiverse and I like to have different kinds of adventures. Readers and writers. I know you and your stories. I know everything about everything, but ... it's boring. Not everything. I want to say that this is a story about me. And now to read and enjoy. Or you visit and it will not end well. (I'm waiting for your ideas.)
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Does this have anything to do with Portal?
Following up my previous comment, it appears it does not. I do not like this story because it does not seem to be my cup of tea, and too many errors, such as Twilight being referred to as a he in some paragraphs and a she in others. There also were a few times where a sentence was started in English but the last word was in a other language I've never really seen much. My point is, you seem to be an alright writer if you could get past these obstacles. I will not rate this story and I wish you the best of luck on this website.
I'm gonna have to agree with him/her. Pretty entertaining but SO MANY ERRORS! I can still understand what you're trying to say but the errors hurt the story, still good, but it has the potential to be better. Try searching for an editor.
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6740271
I'll try . Thanks for the advice .
oh my god . this story seems to be a copy paste from Google translater.
6740780 Thank you. It's good to see that people still listen to these instead of
Dismissing it as hate.
6741069
You have right.
You are good readers and for all I care. Therefore, I will let you choose what Ortix to do in the next chapter. I remember. He can do everything.
6741402 PERSONA
6741572
Maybe.
6741402 ... make a radioactive dragon :3
6754271
Good choice.
6754313 :D
and to you ortrix call me when in need! whoop whoop!
and also because this is about radioactive stuff here is a song..
6758097
Yes. But in the next chapter, I may do something like that.
I really don't know what I just read.
7251503 ME NEITHER WELCOME TO THE INTERNET! WHERE EVERYTHING IS NOTHING AND NOTHING IS BANANAS!
GIVE MOAR IDEAS!!!!!!!!
Because I like when readers are happy. 
PLS
7497765 UHHH UHH MUFFIN BUTTON! [youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?annotation_id=annotation_352743&feature=iv&src_vid=fCNRQFVEdIU&v=xpIeqU0OiAU] UHH UHH CROSSOVER!
7498490 this is it.
Phone guy meet Ortix and he discover on his ship a muffin button. Whatcha think?