Hello my name is Michael and I am displaced in the body Animatronics called Ghost. All wines last part of the power bought from a merchant on the internet. And to make matters worse I'm in Equestria. Not that complain but it's fine because I'm brony and everything goes swimmingly with ... claw. But back . I'm happy with what I am now. I can fly , be unstoppable , and others. As if that weren't enough , I live with Twilight in the library. I don't know what awaits for me, but I'm ready for anything. And in my head I hear Bill Cipher from Gravity Falls.
I GIVE THE A LIKE! (also i dont know what game/movie this is from)
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This is a story Ghost . Animatronic to the planned game SNAD . I don't know when it will create the game , but it is a fansite version FNaF . Soon preferable to try to start to create it .
The next chapter will be about how Ghost is presented to other ponies .
2_Life in Ponyville
Coming soon.
6384744 oh.... K
the grammar hurt a little to read in some parts and there is a image of the ghost and bill cipher? is the triangle in gravity fall?
Its alright but ummm (looks for the purple guy thing) AHA FOUND IT (throws him into a dumbster)
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Good. I will use something like this in the next chapter.
6439315 Nice
This is exactly the type of story I've learned to avoid. But I'm bad, so here I am.
dude there is alot of miss errors but in the same area adn stuff but this is the only one i copied
"Hey make a portal gun JUST DO IT! DONT LET YOUR DREAMS BE DREAMS
Holy S#!1 my brain hurts from teh bad grammerz I can't go on it causes me pane might as well jump out the window (heh bad pun, very bad pun)
Why you don't comment?
Write what I need to add to the story was interesting.
I am waiting.
6384744 You need an editor to help flesh out your sentences better.
te gramer it huert
TEH GRAMER IT HERT HAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
APERTURE YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I CANT DEAL WITH THIS REWRITE YOUR CHAPTERS AAAAHHHHH
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I rewrite one of them.
7198103 thank you
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
Good story, bad grammer. (I can barely understand it!)