Woona desperately spread her tiny wings to slow her descent as she fell through what seemed like empty space for a long time. Eventually, her senses adjusted, and she saw dandelions floating through the air around her. She wasn't sure what to make of it, but didn't have much time to think about it as she soon came to a halt on solid ground she couldn't see far below the floating weeds. Groaning, she pushed herself to her hooves.
Woona...what did you do? Chara demanded angrily.
I took a shortcut, Woona whimpered back in her mind. But...I didn't have enough magic to reach the other end...
Then we could have wound up anywhere! Chara scolded her. Or even anywhen! Why would you take such a risk?
You...you were going to kill Alphys... Woona explained sorrowfully. It was...the only way I could stop you...
Why did you stop me? Chara demanded angrily, power and fury strong in his mental voice.
...because I didn't want to lose you to the empty dark again... Woona offered back, barely able to shape the thought from how much Chara's fury hurt her.
Chara froze as he was about to yell at her again, gazing down at his astral form. He could see the red of his rage that had infused it, and the dark shadows racing through his being once more, the ones that had dominated him as he sat over his grave, waiting for one who could be his tool to bring about destruction...the shadows Woona had worked so hard to purge from him. Shuddering, he pushed his rage back, pulling the magical energy that infused him inward, pushing it back into Woona's body. The red glow faded from his form, as did the shadows, as the realization of how close he'd come to throwing everything away again came to the fore of his mind. I'm...I'm sorry, Woona.
It's okay, Chara, Woona replied softly. Now we just...need to figure out how to get back.
Why can't you use a shortcut? Chara demanded.
For those to work, I need to know start and end coordinates, Woona explained. I have no idea where we are.
At that moment, FIGHT lines appeared around Woona, trapping her in place as they glowed extra strong. She could tell from sight that they would prevent her from running from this FIGHT, which was both worrying and intriguing.
Maybe she knows? Chara offered as Woona turned to face the monster that had created the FIGHT.
The monster was, to all appearances, a young humanoid girl in an al-covering red cloak, the bottom of her face and her tiny feet the only things visible beneath it and the cowl. A large bow held it shut at her neck, and it quickly became apparent that her face was actually a mask she was wearing, though one that shifted in expression on occasion. Woona wasn't sure if that meant the mask was a part of her, or just magical equipment. The name "Red" appeared over her head as the magic of the FIGHT lines took hold.
Little Red Riding Hood? Chara thought, confused.
Shrugging it off, Woona decided to keep her promise and try to make friends. "Hi, I'm Woona!" she greeted warmly. "It's so nice to see a friendly face!"
"My face isn't friendly," Red responded curtly as her magic took shape, forming cross-hairs that tracked Woona as she dodged before seeming to split as though cut by a sword.
Woona gulped nervously. "I'm a little lost," Woona offered. "Could you point the way back to Snowdin? Or Waterfall?" When there was no response, Woona's voice quavered. "Hotland? ...the Core?"
"Seriously?" Red demanded angrily as buzz-saws of magic danced around Woona's side of the FIGHT area, though not close enough to actually hit her when she held perfectly still. "Are you seriously doing this?"
"Doing...what?" Woona asked confused. "Why are you attacking me? I don't wanna fight...I just wanna be friends-"
"Would you shut up?!" Red snarled, her cowl lifting to reveal a furiously glaring topaz eye. "I don't know where you got the idea...but I'm not interested in being your friend! Fight me!"
With that, Red drew a sword as she spread her cloak, revealing a robe bearing the Delta Rune, a symbol worn by the Royal Guard. As she swung her blade, a line of light appeared across the FIGHT area. Woona desperately backed off the line before the area split momentarily in twain, leaving Woona trapped in a much smaller FIGHT area.
"So keep that garbage to yourself!" Red screamed out.
OOOOOOOH WHAT THE!!!! Chara screamed out, stunned.
"You can do that?" Woona gasped out, stunned.
"You may not know about me, but I've already heard about you!" Red snapped, conjuring the spinning blades again. Once more, she split the FIGHT area, and the blades followed the split, forcing Woona to flee from them. "And everything I've heard...it just makes me sick!"
Woona took a few deep breaths, trying to figure out what to do here. Is...is she serious? Does she not want peace?
No, Chara countered, his spiritual gaze focused on Red's face. Something about the way she's talking...Woona, I know this is asking a lot after what I just did, but-
Go for it, Chara, Woona replied. I'll follow your lead.
Chara hesitated. ...you realize I have no way of knowing if I'm doing the right thing, right? That this is just a gut feeling...minus the actual guts?
As long as you keep mine inside me, Woona replied.
As Red hurled a grenade and began to split the FIGHT area again, Chara lunged out of Woona, knocking the grenade out of the ring as he clashed his knife against her sword. "I have to admit," he teased softly, "you're certainly a cut above the rest. However, you need to keep your wits sharp if you want to tango with me."
Red's eyes widened when Chara caught her blow, but narrowed at the jokes he threw her way. "S-seriously?" she stammered, the mouth on her mask pulled into a firm, stubborn line...that quivered at the edges. "Are you really trying to turn this into a big joke?" She leaped back, striking with magic behind her blade to unleash a flurry of blows that slashed across the entire FIGHT area.
Woona pulled herself into an unaffected corner while Chara shrank down and slipped through the spaces. "Would you rather I said it was knife to meet you?" he asked as he lunged in, forcing Red to dance back out of the way of the deadly blade.
"W-what nonsense is this?!" Red demanded, her eyes clenched shut and her mouth in a quavering line as she slashed repeatedly at Chara, only for him to deflect each and every strike. "You're not taking me seriously!"
"And you're missing my point," Chara countered, flashing in past her strikes and leaving his knife point against her mask, right between her eyes. "It's the FIGHT I'm not taking seriously, not you."
"The hell are you talking about?" Red demanded as she struck him aside, now gripping her sword with both hands as she shook with unidentifiable emotion.
"Let's clash for a bit, and I'll show you," Chara offered, lunging in and deliberately clashing his knife against her sword.
Desperately, Red met the charge with one of her own, desperately struggling to overpower the spirit fighting her, only for each attack to be brushed aside almost carelessly, and none of the openings in her defense - however obvious - taken advantage of. "W-what do you think you're doing?" she demanded, her voice now quavering.
"Making friends...my way," Chara replied.
"I told you I don't want to-"
"But you do," Chara countered. "You've watched Woona and I for so long, and what you've seen touches you deeply. You desperately want to be friends...but you've seen what becomes of everyone who falls from the surface. What's the point of caring if you know you're just going to lose them, am I right?"
Red staggered a few steps back, now holding up her sword defensively in front of her body. "H...how do you...?"
"Because I recognize the face on that mask," Chara replied softly. "I've seen it often enough...in reflecting pools, in mirrors, and in the void staring back at me from my own shadow. I know the thoughts behind it well, as I've had them all before. "There's evil in everyone, why believe in the good?" "They'll all die eventually, why waste your life caring?" "You're just going to lose them, and you don't need that pain again." "If life is just pain, why not embrace death?" Sound familiar?"
Red's sword lowered as she continued to stare, her eyes quivering.
"As I said, I've been there," Chara continued, putting his own knife away. "Before I threw myself down Mt. Ebott...as I watched my brother die...saw him transformed into an empty shell...watched more siblings taken in by my mother fall one after the other...I'd given up. I was much further along the path into darkness, despair, and nihilism than you currently are..." Pausing, he gestured to Woona. "And she saved me. She took me into her own soul, refused to believe I was beyond help, and slowly but surely leeched the shadows out of my being..." He spread his arms, showing the pale silvery glow that surrounded his image. "And here I am now, no longer a nihilistic wraith...instead merely a ghost, becoming himself again...the self I wish I'd always been." Slipping past Red's sword, he wrapped his spectral arms around her. "It would be poor repayment indeed if I didn't try to do the same for you."
Red stared at Chara for a time, then sank to her knees, her sword clattering from her hand as she clung to Chara in tears. "But...but you'll both just...die...when you fight Asgore..."
"We aren't going to fight Asgore," Chara told her. "We have a different plan for that. Woona knows what she's doing...and I'll be right by her side."
Red sobbed softly. "You...you really think so?"
"I'm sure of it," Chara replied. "She saved me. Pretty sure she can do anything. Besides...we plan to break the barrier, and let everyone out. And...she's going to save our brother, Asriel, too."
Red's sobs started to quiet. "I...I guess I can...believe once more..." She started to reach for her face.
"May I?" Chara asked, his hand on the mask. Nervously, Red nodded. Woona wasn't able to see what was there when Chara removed the mask, but she saw the tenderness when he wiped her tears away. "You know, you should think about not wearing that mask sometime," Chara offered playfully. "Underneath, you're actually kinda cute."
Red promptly shoved the mask back over her face. "S-shut up!" she snapped angrily, making Chara laugh. "It's not funny!" She tried to punch him, only for her fist to go right through his arm. "Oh, you better watch out if you ever get physical!"
Chara grinned lasciviously. "Promise?"
"GAH!" Red gasped out, pulling her cowl down over her face. She started to say more, but a loud grumbling interrupted her. "...guess I should have eaten before I came out here..."
Smiling, Woona promptly laid out a blanket and plates, setting up a picnic with her supplies. She filled the plates with spider donuts and a slice of pie for each of those present - she had a whole pie in her saddlebags, so she wasn't worried about running out - bottles of cider, and small bowls of Temmie Flakes, only to pause when one of the pastries she pulled out wrapped up by Muffet was one she didn't recognize. "Huh...Cinnamon Bunny? Aren't those from Snowdin?" She glanced at Red, who'd perked up at the mention of it. "Want it?" she offered.
"Those are my favorite..." Red murmured softly.
Smiling, Woona placed it on Red's plate. The three were soon digging into the repast and chatting away. Eventually, however, Woona decided to ask a question. "So...where are we?"
Red lowered her gaze. "We're near the edge of the Underground," she explained. "Close to the edge of the Time-Space bubble that encloses the entire place, created by the barrier. We're right on the edge of the Void."
"So that's why we ended up here when the shortcut failed halfway through," Chara murmured. "The shortcuts work by creating void pockets, connecting discrete points in Space-Time. There was enough magic to get us out of the Void, but not where we were going..."
"Well, we just gotta walk back then, right?" Woona offered.
"Bad idea," Red cautioned. "The normal laws of space-time don't apply this close to the Void. If you don't know exactly where you're going, you could fall into it and never come back out. It takes most monsters years to learn the tricks of navigating out here." She puffed her chest out a bit proudly. "I mastered it in a few months, though."
"Then you could guide us back in?" Chara suggested.
"Unfortunately, no," Red countered. "I've been stationed out here, and I can't abandon my post."
"What if your Captain gave you permission?" Woona suggested.
"...well, I suppose," Red admitted. "But I don't know if she-"
Woona quickly pulled out her phone and dialed. "Undyne?"
"WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!" Undyne screamed through the phone, her voice reaching all the way to Chara and Red. "Alphys has been in a panic ever since your shortcut collapsed before you made it out the other side! She and Mettaton have been trawling the known void pits, Papyrus won't stop making his 'Regretti Spaghetti' - which is really salty, by the way - and Sans was about to take a Void Dive to try and find you! Where are you?"
Woona rubbed at her ears as the shouting finally ended. "Well, right now we're having a picnic with Red," she answered.
"Y...you're where?" Undyne responded, stunned. "Wait...you mean you managed to make friends with her, too? She was dead set against befriending anyone from the surface."
"Well, Chara did most of the work there." Glancing between Red and Chara, Woona grinned impishly and whispered into the phone, "I think Chara's sweet on her."
Undyne burst into laughter. "WAHAHAHAHA! You don't say? Isn't that interesting? Well, you need to be getting back somehow. I still haven't figured out how to find my way out there save by blind luck and magic spear trails, so..."
"Could you give Red permission to leave her post?" Woona asked. "She could show us the way."
"Huh, I suppose she could," Undyne responded. "Give her the phone."
Smiling, Woona floated the phone over to Red. "It's for you."
Curiously, Red took the phone. "Hello?" She straightened almost immediately. "Captain! ...sir? ...yes sir, I can do that! Yes, I know the way there from here. It's rather close actually, easy to reach. Alright, I'll take them there. Yes sir!" Hanging up the phone, she handed it back to Woona. "I'm to guide you back to New Home before taking a new post in the Core until your journey's finished."
"New Home, huh?" Chara asked softly. "I remember that place. I used to live there." Noticing Woona letting out a yawn, he continued, "You can drop us off in my old room there, tucking Woona into my old bed so she can get some rest."
"I can do that," Red agreed, scooping Woona into her arms. "This way."
Smiling, Chara floated alongside Red as she carried Woona back into normal space and up the path to a house that was almost identical to the one in the Ruins, save it was built of gray stone rather than purple. "You're really good at spatial manipulation," he complimented. "The only one I know who can do it cleaner is Sans."
"Captain Undyne says I'm a natural!" Red responded proudly, beaming with a grin from ear to ear.
Before long, they reached the room and Red tucked Woona in. "See you later?" Chara asked her.
"...maybe," Red replied, turning to leave.
Hearing Chara sigh, Woona giggled to herself, the chance of her brother's happiness and the approaching end of her journey filling her with DETERMINATION.
Huh, Red inclusion. There's a turn I didn't expect. Oh well, enjoyed it, none the less.
Was Red always part of Canon? I am not well versed in the lore of Undertale and all it fanons.
Me atm:
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No, Red's a fan created boss enemy.
7314244 I didn't expect it either, but it was DEFINITELY worth it... Does this mean she's gonna be in the ending too?
Another very enjoyable chapter. Great job.
7314268 Red is part of an Undertale fangame:
7314276 I refuse!
I scour through FIMFICTION for more stories...
7314268 Red is(as far as I know) a fan made character in a fan made fight. She is still an amazing character and I really like the involvement with her and Chara in the story.
Damn you, you've given the CharaXWoona countless foes, I know not if we may hold out much longer.
It's so close to ending ;( WHHHHY!!!!!!!!!
Also, nice that you included Red in this!
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OKAY! WE GET IT! This fic isn't canon to the PWNY-Verse!
Played the fangame in question just a day or two ago, and suddenly I see this. TIMING!
Daaaaaw...
Lovely chapter!
On a side note: I ship it. I ship like postal service.
Sure wasn't expecting this! LOVE how you made it work thematically with the rest of the story too!
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OMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSH... eh, I'm over it now... not really; OMYGO-
Woona. Also, I don't know if you've noticed, but you have this weird habit of having double spaces after sentences.
Because you were acting like an idiotic peabrain, and you need to calm the fuck down.
No, bad Chara, go to your room!
Nah, she's more like Ruby Rose.
With a little bit of Weiss Schnee mixed in.
img14.deviantart.net/7c20/i/2016/006/d/c/undertale___red__fan_character__by_whiteskypony-d9myu21.png Dawwww, she's cute with a smile!
So let me get this straight. You've come up with an idea about a pocket where space and time have no meaning unless you have specific credentials... and you haven't even gotten past Act 5 Act 1 of Homestuck? Cool.
yawn,
So what can I really say about this chapter? No, seriously, what can I say about it? I guess I can start with saying it's a touch underwhelming to me, but that's to be expected when you use a character like Red; she's beloved because of her style of battling, her personality, the vast amount of routes that can be explored with her, she's someone who even the smartest of people can't help but say "TERBY, PUTT HUR INN DEH GAMZEE!" But... I guess you put more emphasis on the Weiss than you did the Ruby... if that makes any sense??? Yeah, there wasn't quite enough awkwardness in her characterization in order to take it as well as I could, but not everything is scrumdiddlyumptiously perfect.
But that's not too much in the grand scheme of things. Other people are most assuredly going "OMG, RED N CHARA R SEW KYEUWT!!!", but I guess I'm just a bit put off by it. Maybe if there was more time and care put to the two of them or something, I dunno. But hey, it's like Red always says:
Thaaaaaaaat's politics! Now get out there and hug your wafflemakers, everydoggy! FOOOUUURTEEEEN YEEEEAAAARRRRS OOOOLLLLLD!... Wow, the anesthesia for my ingrown toenail must finally be catching up to me. Anyways, later.
I'm sticking Chara and Red in a box and sending it all the way to Australia, I ship them so hard.
I just realized there's no Luna emoticon
Man, you had me worried with how the last chapter ended. Thank God I had worried for nothing. I wish I could make a pun for this chapter but Chara took all but one pun. Still I had a ... Blast.
7314392 I ship it too. All the way to sea and around the world until it comes back to where it started.
7314449 As I am known to say, ship it on the Frisco!
I normally don't ship Chara with anyone, but I ship this so much.
Whoa, I did not expect Red to appear in this story! But it was nice to see Woona and Chara make friends with her.
I wonder what's next for the duo? I think it'll be a bit of an emotional chapter with Woona and Chara exploring New Home before meeting Sans. Or it would be something else. But whatever it is, I hope it'll be something good.
OHHHHHHHHH WHAT THE!!
Woona, why didn't you throw the Stick?
...Woona, where's your Stick?
7311999 Nah, I feel for you. Just try to read through the whole chain next time. Cause sheesh, I wouldn't want to do that again if I were you. But trust me, I've done many things of similar embarrassment levels and worse.
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Woona never had a stick.
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Oh. Right. That would explain that.
Although... Frisk's starting items are Stick and Bandage.
Ribbon and Toy Sword, Manly Headband and Tough Gloves, Ballerina Tutu and Dancing Shoes, Glasses and Worn Notebook, Cowboy Hat and Empty Gun, Stained Apron and Burnt Pan.
Locket and Dagger. Heart Locket and Real Knife.
What are Luna's items?
.....This color text thing said it was orange, but... It wasn't orange. I'm dissapointed.
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Woona had no starting items.
I ship it. Red x Chara is OTP.
Once again, not gonna pun.
This is cute towards the end though.
hey, so for those of you who didn't know, yes, the Red battle is fanmade, but there is a rumour (it may have been substantiated) that it's based on a Toby Fox character that he'd initially designed for the game but couldn't work out where to fit it in, so he scrapped it. Nevertheless, I must say I rather like the insertion into the story, especially the way Chara dealt with her :D
YEEEEESSSSSS!!!! MY WISH TO SEE RED APPEAR HAS BEEN GRANTED!!!!! Also, thumbs up for shipping her with Chara. Nice touch.
Again! Grrr. Every time I make a guess, It turns out I was completely off the mark. *Pouts*
That;s not to say this is a bad chapter, just... I will guess one correctly eventually!
I hope...
Next stop. Hall of Judgement with Sans... I always get impacted so hard when Sans reveals the full wording of the acronyms for LOVE and EXP. Level Of ViolencE and EXecution Points... just... damn that was a shock when I first saw it.
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That's just silly, why wouldn't she have a stick? you never know when you might need a stick.
The next chapter( the one where were the confrontation with Asgore is interupted by Toriel followed by everyone coming) should be called "and everyone came" and the chapter after( the one where Asriel fights us) should be called "but it refused"
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You're assuming that's what's going to happen.
7315094 Tibia honest, I thought this chapter would have Gaster in it.
7314979 Wasn't it said she started with a lot of bits/gold?
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True, she started with a bag of bits, and that's it.
7315178 So her starting item was a bag of bits
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Yup.
I love this fan game. Red is so interesting.
Still haven't been able to beat her in combat though, with her weird delta rune turrets and all.
7314987 Guess you're not redy for the puns? Must take a lot of effort to avoid puns for so long, am I right?
Okay, I'm leaving now.
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7314445 double-spacing after sentences used to be the convention in the days of mechanical typewriters. Nowadays, the convention is to keep with a single space, but people who learned the earlier convention (or learned from someone who learned the earlier convention) will sometimes use a double space - or, of course, sometimes you get a bit of key-bounce, particularly when typing quickly, and a character gets doubled accidentally - and a double space after a sentence is one of the few examples where auto-correct won't pick up on it.
7315408 Not so much that I can't pun but I just don't pun because of the situation. There will always be a time to pun. This is not one of them.
That was awesome Tat, I love how you got red in here.
7313482 I meant like put a saddle on her. get your mind out of the gutter!
Something I was hyped for died down almost immediately.
Inb4 Asgore walks in and sees a sleeping pony in Chara's bed.
7315541 It's not even that bad.
7315848 Which would you rather use? Common sense or Comic Sans?