MLP/Undertale crossover.
Not a PWNY-verse story.
Long ago, the Monsters and Humans fought a great war. The Monsters lost, and were sealed in the Underground. It would take the power of seven human souls to break the barrier that kept them imprisoned. They only had six. And so the Monsters waited and hoped, praying that another human would find their way to the Underground. Some thought the seventh soul would give their King the strength to break the barrier. Some dreamed of a human who would be their friend, and save them all...or had nightmares of one who would bring back the war.
...but nobody came.
...but somepony did.
Eons after the war, with no way to tell how much time had passed above, a tiny blue filly with wings and horn fell into the underground, calling for her Mama. None knew the poor creature's nature or origins...but her soul was powerful with magic, even more so than a human soul.
None can know what will come...of this little 'Woona'.
Cover art by Sanyo21
Holy shit yes....
More!
Preemptively thumbed up and faved, because OH MY GOD WOONA IN UNDERTALE AND IT'S BY TATS!
Edit after reading: No regrets.
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ALL OF MY YE-
AAAAND you misspelled break.
Aaaaand another one.
OMG! I wasn't expecting this story so soon!
Only watching for now. Looks good, but I'll reserve favorites and thumbs up for later.
In the words of pretty much everyone:
Meh.
Not your best work but still good enough to read.
Well, not the one i was waiting for ("Three more things"
) But a good story so far
The sight of a new Tatsurou story fills you with DETERMINATION!
INSTANT FAV SUCKA!
Jeeeez, its a wee WOONA!
*falls over*
heehehehe
Yay!
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I have nothing else to say...
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...nothin' else.....
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exept my story's cooler
SHUP UP EGO YOUR RUINING MY REPUTATION
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Good start
... I'm going to be feeling that for a few days... You hit me in the feels.
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Wtf im not complaining but what thank you but where did this come from
Seeing this story pop up fills you with determination.
GOD DAMN IT FLOWEY!!! WHERE ARE YOU!?! WHERE ARE YOU, YOU WORTHLESS FLOWER PIECE OF TRASH!?! I'LL RIP YOUR PETALS OUT ONE BY BLOODY ONE!!!!
*ahem*
Sorry about that, but... I despise Flowey. In other news, though, yay! Toriel/Goatmom to the rescue!
Yes... Yessssss... The world needs more D'aws...
Thank you. For writing this.
ok someone has to make fan art of that haven't had a d'awww induced heart attack since reading Fortresshy. Also you gunna have little woona go with pacifist or genocide. either would make for a good read but pacifist definitely has more d'awwws in it than the other
Pretty good so far, though I have to ask; will Luna meet Frisk later on, or is Frisk basically being replaced by her in this story?
Well, time to add another story to the Reading List. Hmmm, though I wonder... To what other work will Celestia in her own turn be thrust upon? *crosses fingers for Asura's Wrath*
Anywho, yay stories!
Marry me please....thats all i can say to express how much im already liking this
!!!!!
before i start reading what is this a cross over with?
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD
I cannot contain my excitement, GAHHHHHHHHHHH! Tatsurou, you are the friggin best!
6704098 xD. You're not the only one
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Overhorns.
No, wait, got that mixed up a little. UNDERTALE.
Instant Fav just because it's Undertale, instant like just because it has Woona.
I hope to see how thing's go from here, and I can't wait for Woona to meet Sans
OH MY FUCKING SHITTING JESUS FUCKING CHRIST. YOU DID IT. YOU HAVE BECOME A GOD.
6704098 But he's only like this because he has no SOUL. He can't feel anything except for loneliness and boredom, and he's spent ages RESETTING over and over, until everybody around him seems like a bunch of canned, mechanical responses. He's done almost everything you can do in the Underground, and he can't derive enjoyment from any of it.
Certainly, he's sadistic, but he's got quite possibly the best Freudian Excuse in video game history for it. His antipathy really isn't his own fault. If anyone deserves your hate, it's Chara. He/she is directly responsible for Flowey's current state.
The worst part is that I can easily see Woona taking the genocide route. Every single monster attacks you in Undertale even if they claim they're your friend. It would be very easy for Woona, who even says that she didn't understand what's going on, to make the connection that having friends would only hurt you especially if Toriel tries to fight her to stop her from leaving.
Yes. That is all I can say.
THE FEELS HAVE RETURNED IN FORCE,SIR!!!!!
.......*Straps myself into a chair, use duct tape....and waited* My mind is ready to be blown away with this.
ME SO HAPP 'BOUT THIS!
6704098 Eh, I can let some things slide, given Flowey's origins....
Yee haw
Why so many page breaks?
This ought to be fun, especially if Frisk or Chara is thrown into the mix later. Not counting on it, since it isn't PWNYverse, but would still be interesting to see how Luna could affect the outcomes of a run.
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Each page break is a shift in perspective, since I felt this first chapter needed to be told from both Woona and Flowey's perspectives.
...Interesting.
Knowing that the baby alicorn will one day fREAKING GROW OUT OF ADDING W'S WHERE THEY AREN'T SUPPOSED TO GO--
*ahem*
-fills me with determination.
Excellent work so far, however, my personal rules prevent me from favouriting something after only one chapter, even if it's you.
Instant favorite my friend for the Undertale story
6704351 Celly's gonna be on a LOONG LONG TREK.
I was waiting SO MUCH for a Undertale story from Tatsurou! Really, when I saw this I just smiled, holy shit
THE DETERMINATION HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
I look forward to goatmom/ adorable moon pirate shenanigans.
Somehow i would like to see an undertale fanfiction that doesn't use the Game mechanic
I get that that the game itselfs likes to play with its own Meta, but somehow it feels that the whole thing was more like a Analogy for the real battle that happens, like it is shown in some Undertale comics.
The whole game Mechanics break the immersion in the story very strongly because in the game we have visuals to show us the whole thing and we know that the whole thing is a game but in a written story there the whole going Meta doesn't work in the same way.
just my opinion on the whole thing
Fantastic! I can't wait for more.
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Then it's a good thing this is the only part where I'll be using that part of the Meta, then, isn't it?