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YADAMAN


Hayo, this is YADAMAN - a relatively new-ish brony that loves to read, write, draw and play video games... very typical... I know!

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Three years have past since Twilight Sparkle's ascension, and things could not go any smoother. At least it WAS going great until a deadly virus suddenly is killing off everypony.

Twilight and the gang are told by Princess Celestia herself to not get involved, yet that seems a bit ominous, so they decide to work under the radar. In order to finish the job however, they need somepony's help. They hire an expert, Doctor Whooves.

With the Doctor's help, the Main Six must figure out not only how to stop this virus, but also the culprit who started this monstrosity.

Despite all their precautions, that doesn't mean that they all will escape it unscathed...

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

One small point, from the context, the title is spelled with a capital C?

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Oh I just simply did a combination, more like a swap really, of the word 'Contagion' and 'Pony', by simply just switching the first letter.

To be honest, I didn't really have decent title for this particular story, since putting the actual word, 'Contagion' would had been cliche, but it probably would had been better if I done so.

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Oh I just simply did a combination, more like a swap really, of the word 'Contagion' and 'Pony', by simply just switching the first letter.

This does sound like a fair explanation to reason behind the choice. In effect, you made a Punny, right there.
Just not sure how other readers are reacting on your title. Readersmay be thickle and hard to predict.

To be honest, I didn't really have decent title for this particular story, since putting the actual word, 'Contagion' would had been cliche, but it probably would had been better if I done so.

I guess just the word could be seen just like that, yes. Try to avoice cliche as far as possible is good, too.
Take a moment and consider the title carefully. This is the first chance to draw in the readers you wan to enjoy the adventure at hoof.
From the tags, they are ponies, but before I delve too deep, there is a promise of bloodshed, from what I can see.

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Alrighty, thanks for the help! I really appreciate it! I will focus on that. (my other upcoming stories actually have better titles, I can guarantee that, but this one... it never really clicked from the start, so that's totally my problem :P)

I'm still getting the hang of all sorts of things here on FIMFiction (including the tags), and any sort of help is always welcome here! :pinkiehappy:

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