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Skylinx Prime
Luna and Chrysalis rule. Celestia and the elements DROOL!
Skylinx Prime
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Why people hating my FOE story when it just started. this story has been in planning since 2013
what is the real problem with my story hmmmm some one tell me
Their are a few grammar problems, even I could help but I'm not vary good. I'd say you need to get a good editor, thair are people who can do that you just have to poke around it seems. Anyway, the concept seems interesting enough (I kind of want to think that your the kid of shining armor but that would be too op) but I think that the entire thing needs editing before you can realy progress and you should realy get it done before you upload it like it seems you have.
I kind of have to assume English isn't your first language, and I think that an editory will realy help.
6667356 I am English I was born in the UK and still live in the UK it's just that its been along time since I wrote a story based on a game, plus a week ago yesterday someone already took the job
6669084 alright, thats good ^-^ it just does have alot of trouble... in that presuasion.
Interesting fanfic so far, keep it up.
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I believe I can answer that. Not trying to sound harsh here but your main character seems needlessly edgy and you really need to learn proper grammar and capitalization. You seem to capitalize words at random and should definitely thin about consulting the writing guide on the site. You've got potential for sure but need practice.
Basing off of first impressions, I'm guessing why this story is getting disliked is for 1.Stable Dweller cliche and/or 2. It's a FoE story. There is a few people who just dislikes FoE stories, for there is so many of them.