It's been a long day, everyone sees me smiling and running home not a care in the world....but between us, I'm sad. I...have lost everything except my music, my emotions have been poured into every song and no one seems to hear it, no one feels it. I cry at home some nights, sometimes during the day when no one is looking, but it's all good...she'll come back........I'm sorry Octavia, so so sorry.
Very interesting....
Going to track this to see where it goes. Keep up the good work though.
This could very well end badly. Poor Scratch.
I don't see many vinyl fics anymore so this one is a good find. I'm watching this one. You have my interest.
Finds this
Thinks it's gonna be good
It was good
Do continue.
I wanna thank you all so much for reading this, your feedback is unimaginably great and I hope you continue to read but if it is no trouble for you to possibly share this story with your friends or fellow bronies it would be great, but I understand it is an unusual request but I wanna get this story out there, well again THANK YOU
So far it is soooooooooooo good keep up the good work bro :)
This. This is just beautiful. Though I found 2 spelling errors:
'hew' should be 'hue'
At the last part of the chaper, 'threw' should be 'through'
Any other errors were either missing commas or run-on sentences, but I'm not a Grammar Nazi. And before I forget, 1.bp.blogspot.com/-_TkbcIBMy1Y/T2Ioh3r-T_I/AAAAAAAABGA/BAJcgUhFm7c/s1600/firstpost.jpg
Very nice i know I'll read the rest.
FIRST! And very beautiful.
I love watching Vinyl have a mental breakdown, its so interesting
Great story so far!
hope there is more coming soon!
music + rain + your story = cardiac arrest
Oh st this is getting intense man! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Happy Ending?
wah? two words, proof reader.
UGH not the grammar again
691117 that really awkward moment when you're really post #10
yeah! another update within the hour I finished the chapter before! tears of joy
beautiful. simply beautiful.
yay Happy Ending
Great Story the end was a bit short but still it was a great ending...
That was a really nice story
But I would have to suggest you get an editor because the grammatical errors made it more difficult to read.