Set shortly after "Crusaders of the Lost Mark". Though she finally stood up to her mother and expresses a genuine wish to be a better filly, Diamond Tiara really DOES have A LOT of nasty stuff to make up for. Half-fortunately, half-unfortunately, a new bully even nastier than SHE used to be just might give her the opportunity she needs to patch things up with the other students - especially Silver Spoon (as the bully in question is a nasty colt who has a VERY one-sided crush on her). However, with the help of her former enemies/new friends, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, she just might pull it off.
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Who is Hugh?
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Huh? I don't understand what you're on about.
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I counted a lot more.
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There is no "hugh", just folks saying "ugh".
I stopped reading this fic when I came to Nyx' appearance, to avoid spoilers for "Past Sins", as I haven't read it yet (and you SHOULD add a spoiler warning here, I already read something at the beginning of the fic that seems mention something from "Past Sins" and newer bronies don't know the story yet!). But here's a little feedback anyway:
You managed it good to capture Diamond's feelings and the pacing is fine, but a lot of your sentences are confusing and built the wrong way. Since the problem is pretty heavy, I think it would be the best for you to get a pre-reader and an editor to help you fix the dents in the story.
I would be delighted to see these mistakes fixed once I return after I have read "Past Sins" (whenever that may be).