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Ninjaoftimeandspace


Obsessed with Sunset Shimmer and Sunlight

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Summer has arrived for the students of Canterlot High School, Twilight had planned the perfect summer trip for her and her new friends. However, when she learns most of them have other things planned only Sunset Shimmer joins her in the grand adventure. Of course down the road and in summers heat things might just become more complicated than Twilight perceived. [Sunlight Road Trip!AU]

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

This sounds really good.I can't wait to read more.

So cute, please keep updating. :D

Loving this story man

Pretty good so far, though I spotted a couple of issues you might want to clear up.

"Yeah, I am. I'm more into chemistry that astronomy, but seeing you enjoy yourself is making this worthy wild."

Pretty sure that would sound better as

"Yeah, I am. I'm more into chemistry than astronomy, but seeing you enjoy yourself is making this worth while."

Also:

How is it possible that we spent an extra threes at the museum?

I think you missed the word 'hours' in there somehow.

Love it so far!!!!!! Please continue!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

Nice and cozy chapter

The story's very cute, but if you don't mind me asking, would you like a hand with editing?

Hope to see another chapter. If you need an editor, please let me know, I'd be happy to do so

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